Jen Posted November 29, 2007 Report Posted November 29, 2007 Nice update! 'Would you rather one of us die or get drunk and hang out with friends?' Again, I really liked that quote Get drunk of course! *kidding* Quote
matticus01 Posted December 1, 2007 Report Posted December 1, 2007 I stood on the sand 'Maybe it's true' She said quietly I turned sharply to look at her 'What?' She was leaning in, then her lips were against mine. This wasn't like Belles defintion of a kiss, this was soft, beutiful, luscious, like a dream, maybe it was a dream. Maybe I'd wake up, right now and find it was all just in a stupid dream..... I woke up. next issue-Who was the dream about?? MATTIE!!!MATTIE!!!MATTIE!!!... the dream was about MATTIE!!! I hope Quote
Jen Posted December 2, 2007 Report Posted December 2, 2007 Great new chapter. I like Seductive!Belle. I agree with matticus - the dream hopefully is about Mattie! Quote
*caitie* Posted December 3, 2007 Report Posted December 3, 2007 hehe maybe you'll get a surprise then!!! Quote
matticus01 Posted December 4, 2007 Report Posted December 4, 2007 'I've always loved you Lucas Holden,' She looked up shyly 'Do you love me back?' I hesitated, thinking. Did I really, deep down, love Matilda Hunter? Would I cheat on her, Or look at another girl, Would I tell her, everyday, that she's the only girl I cared about, and couldn't go through life without her? 'Yes, I love you Mattie' I said She smiled at me, and then kissed me again, this time for longer Next issue~~An unwelcome visitor turns up at school, who is it?? OMG that was so beautiful... I new it was Mattie!!! I love that part especially Hmmm it better not be the guy trying to kill Luc all over...GREAT chapter:D Quote
Jen Posted December 6, 2007 Report Posted December 6, 2007 Aww... that's so cute! Great writing. Lucas the romantic, I like! Update soon! Quote
*caitie* Posted December 10, 2007 Report Posted December 10, 2007 hey sorry that shouldn't be there!! Quote
Jen Posted December 10, 2007 Report Posted December 10, 2007 I think this will be a short chapter!!! part 20 Lucas' P.O.v "SCHOOL IS BORING" I sat in class and copied that down atleast 50 times. Why couldn't Mr. Chilskey make his slass a little more entertaining? That is a very short chapter, Lol! But I can totally relate. Quote
matticus01 Posted December 10, 2007 Report Posted December 10, 2007 wow yeah that was VERRRRRRRY short lol...well then hurry n update lol Quote
matticus01 Posted December 11, 2007 Report Posted December 11, 2007 OH MY GOD, OH MY HOD OH MY GOD you cant leave it there.........oh wait you did please dont find lucas....i know he's after lucas.... oh my god you need to update.....NOW Quote
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