Jen Posted December 13, 2007 Report Posted December 13, 2007 Great chapter, the build up was good. I don't know whether a teacher would leave his class, even for a moment while there is a gunman loose, but still I can see why you had to write it like that. (I only say because I find constructive criticism helpful) Wonder who the gunman is? The plot thickens. Hope you update soon. Quote
*caitie* Posted December 13, 2007 Report Posted December 13, 2007 yeh I didn't think it was very realistic after I read it over, but I'd already posted it and couldn't be stuffed to go over it again! Thanks for the constructive critisism! I really need that so i sort of know what to write so thanks!!! Quote
matticus01 Posted December 19, 2007 Report Posted December 19, 2007 wow that was great no matta how short it was... update soon that was so close Quote
*caitie* Posted December 19, 2007 Report Posted December 19, 2007 ooh!!I need to do some spoilers!!! Reveal hidden contents Martha and Jack have some HUGE news!!What is it?? And Lucas has another dream, and dreads it more than any other, what is it?? Quote
Jackieleanne Posted December 19, 2007 Report Posted December 19, 2007 Just read it and this is a really good story love it, glad that they are ok and dreading what is going to happen next. Great work Quote
matticus01 Posted December 21, 2007 Report Posted December 21, 2007 martha and jack have huge news.............PREGNANT? Luc has another dream and dreads it more than any other................ oh god please have nothing to do with Mattie Quote
Jackieleanne Posted December 23, 2007 Report Posted December 23, 2007 Awww sweet chapter Mattie and Lucas godparents bless and Martha and Jack Parents. Tut tut Martha having wine and loved Lucas reaction to the wine. Quote
Jen Posted December 25, 2007 Report Posted December 25, 2007 Woah, what a cliff hanger! The Lucas dream was very eery and scary. That bit was written exceptionally well. Can't wait to see what's happening next. Merry Christmas! Quote
matticus01 Posted December 29, 2007 Report Posted December 29, 2007 omg that was so f***in beautiful i loved it... but what's wrong with Lucas? Please let him be ok and please update soon :lol: Quote
Jen Posted December 29, 2007 Report Posted December 29, 2007 Oh, I was hoping for more than that. A well written update, especially the descriptions of how Lucas was feeling. More soon, hopefully? Quote
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