*caitie* Posted December 30, 2007 Report Posted December 30, 2007 Yeah I'm sorry I do very short updates but I have 2 older sisters and one younger brother that are constantly wanting to get on. I'll do a big update sometime!! Quote
Jen Posted January 1, 2008 Report Posted January 1, 2008 No rush! Better to have short updates than none at all! Quote
matticus01 Posted January 1, 2008 Report Posted January 1, 2008 OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG brilliant...as always... sorry about all the oh my god's lol... i hope they are going to be ok, Lucas's dream cant come true it just cant... i want Mattie and Martha to save the day!!! update soon like now :blink: Quote
Jen Posted January 3, 2008 Report Posted January 3, 2008 Fab update! I agree with matticus, Lucas dream can't come true! Well, if it does I hope he's ok. Maybe the person shooting misses him or something. Hope so... The action in this chapter was great. It all came together well at the end. Quote
sarahandkatie Posted January 3, 2008 Report Posted January 3, 2008 PLease please please update i just read the whole fic in one sitting and need another fix, very very quickly! Quote
matticus01 Posted January 4, 2008 Report Posted January 4, 2008 oh my that was so brilliant. So emotionally well written, especially Mattie's point of veiw it was amazing. I cant believe you would leave it there... you need to update immediately please!!! Quote
sarahandkatie Posted January 4, 2008 Report Posted January 4, 2008 oh my gosh i need to know what happens to Luc he can't die MAttie needs him!!!!! update soon pretty please! Quote
*caitie* Posted January 5, 2008 Report Posted January 5, 2008 Haha, I'll update my fic if you update yours!!lol Quote
Jen Posted January 5, 2008 Report Posted January 5, 2008 So much emotion! Brilliantly written, you are definitely getting better and this story has progressed. Nice cliffhanger ending, I hope Luc is ok. A tear slid down his cheek and landed on my shirt. He grasped my hand and he was the last thing I felt before I blacked out I really like that line. You created so much tension, but also gave each character their own weaknessness which makes them easier to relate too. Great work! Quote
matticus01 Posted January 5, 2008 Report Posted January 5, 2008 HEY girly, i updated my fic so time to update yours lol Quote
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