sarahandkatie Posted January 5, 2008 Report Posted January 5, 2008 update update update update PLEASE!!!! Quote
Jen Posted January 7, 2008 Report Posted January 7, 2008 Awwww.. that's so sad! I felt so sorry for Mattie. I sank to the floor, burying my face in my hands one more. This couldn’t be happening. Just yesterday I had been telling Lucas what to do if these people came up to him. But now that advice seemed do useless, even my life seemed useless. I stumbled outside and sat down on a chair and looked up at the sky. I wondered, as clouds went across the sky, how they could keep going, when so many things were happening to the world, all the pain and suffering, and some of that pain was happening to me. The pain felt so real that I could run a thousand miles, or scream at someone, at the world. And yet, as I thought of the millions of other people that were suffering in the world, I felt so small, that I should just sit down and cry, because that’s all I could do, so insignificant against the world. This bit is so descriptive. It was really beautiful. I also liked how you made Henry the comforter. Their sibling relationship is so sweet. Quote
matticus01 Posted January 10, 2008 Report Posted January 10, 2008 hey i just read it and it was soooooooooooooooooooo beautiful, loving, caring, emotional plz update soon hope Luc will be ok Quote
matticus01 Posted January 20, 2008 Report Posted January 20, 2008 The man looked at the boy one last time, then, without time to stop himself, flicked the switch. He hear the continuous beep of the machine as he jumped out the window and felt a twinge of regret, but knew he could do nothing to help the boy, he was long gone, Lucas Holden was dead. Lucas Holden is not....NOT DEAD... Dont make him die great update though and dont worry about it being so short... update soon though Quote
Jen Posted January 22, 2008 Report Posted January 22, 2008 That was ... ! I don't know what to say. I really didn't see that coming. The description from that *evil* guy was brilliant. It was kind of omniscient - so he could be an innocent bystander not knowing anything than what he could see from above. Like, he got physical appearance and had to deduce the rest. A great cliff hanger and can not wait to see what happens next. Quote
*caitie* Posted January 23, 2008 Report Posted January 23, 2008 Thankyou!! In the next chapter there is going to be a Henrys P.O.V, so don't know how that's going to go!! Quote
matticus01 Posted January 24, 2008 Report Posted January 24, 2008 Thankyou!! In the next chapter there is going to be a Henrys P.O.V, so don't know how that's going to go!! damn i thought there was an update...hurry up and update i wanna know what happens Quote
matticus01 Posted January 25, 2008 Report Posted January 25, 2008 No he cant be dead.......NO NO NO NO NO NO NO HE CANT BE DEAD *cries* Poor Mattie! If I know you Caitie, you love Mattie and Luc as a couple...are you...UP...to something??? you must huury and post the next chapter so i can read it...I'mmmmmmm the first to post yay Quote
*caitie* Posted January 25, 2008 Report Posted January 25, 2008 If I know you Caitie, you love Mattie and Luc as a couple...are you...UP...to something??? Hahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!maybe Quote
Jen Posted January 30, 2008 Report Posted January 30, 2008 OMG! No! Even though it was a short chapter it was so full of emotion that I don't think I could have handled anymore. Henry's POV was great - very brotherly. So sad! Lucas can't be dead - just can't! Quote
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