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omg omg sorry I haven't updates 4 ages!!I've been to the 7/8 cmp and Camp Clayton if any1 knows where that is..............Yeh...Sorry I'll update soon i promise!!!!

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Woah! I don't know what to say. Even though the ending is up in air, I does seem perfect. It reminds me rather of the Harry Potter epilogue (and I mean that as a great compliment), the way that every one turns out ok and the next generation are growing up. Thank goodness Lucas ended up ok in the end - hopefully? Your writing has improved heaps throughout this fic. The way you describe both the person and the scene is a lot better. The way you have written the Lucas/Mattie relationship was very believable. I hope you keep writing and I get to read more of your fics. :)

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that was so brilliant and so left up in the air....LIKE...like there is a sequel coming or something but im sad that its the end but thanks for making it so brilliant and worth the read well done :lol:

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well you could do a chapterof lucas's dream or something about two children or something....of Lucas's dream could be Mattie gets hurt or is in hospital but lucas doesn't know why and then its revealed that Mattie is due to give birth or something or she had fainted and she finds out she preggers but apart from that ihave no idea but hope its given you an idea :rolleyes:

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