HighwayUnicorn Posted January 9, 2011 Report Posted January 9, 2011 Oh my gosh! How are they gonna find Flissy now!? But Sean deserved it! Poor Aden. I can totally understand why he's so angry. Another amazing & very emotional chapter. I love everyone's relationship with each other. Just, perfect. I hate Sean though. Fantastic work. Well done. Love Carina xxx Quote
kitkat1992 Posted January 9, 2011 Report Posted January 9, 2011 Wow what a chapter...it was definitely worth the wait I hope they find flissy and that Charlie had a brainwave with the phone...maybe she was able to check where the call came from or something. Can't wait for more Quote
hitmanfan Posted January 9, 2011 Report Posted January 9, 2011 right, now... ok, this can still be ok... Charlie and the phone has to be the light at the end of the tunnel, and a way to get to Flissy. ohh btw I like the way of getting rid of Sean at least it won't end up with Aden or Justin facing jail! Quote
xknomex Posted January 30, 2011 Author Report Posted January 30, 2011 *sigh* Thank God for that!!!!!!!!!!!! whooohoooo! AMAZING chapter, you wrote that so well!!!!!!!! could feel Aden's emotions! amazing! can't wait for the next chappie! fluff? Quote
hitmanfan Posted January 30, 2011 Report Posted January 30, 2011 wow, you really know how to pull at the heartstrings THANK YOU for not hurting Fliss in anyway !!! as Naomi said, can't wait for the next chapter and yes please to fluff Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted January 31, 2011 Report Posted January 31, 2011 Wow, Ellen. Just wow as per usual. I loved that update. & seriously, thank goodness they found Flissy & it's even better that she's not hurt. Aden was just amazing in that chapter. He was just perfect. You could really relate to his feelings & everything, being upset & needing to find Fliss. I just love how protective he is over his family. He's wonderful. I thought Justin was amazing too - you could really sense his presence when he was with Aden. He was really good for supporting him & that worked so well. They have a great relationship. Hmm, not too sure anout Sean & whether he should live or die. On one hand, he deserves to die. On the other, he needs to be punished for what he has done to Belle & Flissy. Anyway, yeah, amazing update & I look forward to more. Well done. Love Carina xxx Quote
xknomex Posted February 21, 2011 Author Report Posted February 21, 2011 poor poor Jax good job he's got an aden as a daddy to look after him! and Aden blaming himself! but love how they all stayed in the hospital together as a family! can't wait what they do with all that money ;) hehe Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted February 21, 2011 Report Posted February 21, 2011 Ellen that was just amazing. I loved everything about that chapter. Roman & Justin being there for Belle, Aden & the kids was lovely. Wouldn't it be nice if everyone had a doctor like Rachel? Because there is no way you could get a doctor at a hospital let you use it as a hotel for your family Maybe I just go to the wrong hospital. I loved that Belle & Aden were there to comfort Jackson & I hope he'll be okay & happier now. But I do understand him being scared & upset bless him. & I loved the interaction between Belle, Aden & Fliss & then it progressing to Belle & Aden. A bit of fluff there too. That was so nice to see after all the drama & angst. Although how can Aden blame himself? So typical for him to feel like he should have been there to protect them all. I love protective Aden. He was just amazing in that chapter. Amazing stuff. Seriously well done. Perfect emotions Ellen. I loved that chapter. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx Quote
xknomex Posted March 9, 2011 Author Report Posted March 9, 2011 i wanna go tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Jackson's so excited and Aden is the best dad ever! and Justin is just such a nice guy and omg i can't wait for them to get there!!!!!!!!!!! update sooooooon! Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted March 9, 2011 Report Posted March 9, 2011 I loved that chapter. So beautifully written Ellen, well done. Poor Jax & Belle for having the nightmares. & Aden ... but he won't talk about them! I suppose he wants to be strong for everyone. Disneyworld! That brings back so many childhood memories for me! The anticipation of going there is just incredible - it makes children's dreams Love it. My mum & dad told me & my sister we were going out for the day, then we turned up at the station & opened the car boot. There were suitcases & mymum said, 'we can either go to Folkestone for the day or we can go to Disneyland Paris.' A few years later, I discovered America's Disneyworld. I actually am so looking forward to reading them going on holiday! Well done Ellen & I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx Quote
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