callyha Posted May 14, 2010 Report Posted May 14, 2010 Aww, Charlie?Ruby bonding Glad Charlie told someone about the memories, But I hope she hasn't had an affair Great chapter, More soon please Quote
Laura158 Posted May 16, 2010 Report Posted May 16, 2010 I've just started reading this fiction and I'm loving it! You write so well and really display the emotions of the characters beautifully I liked that Charlie told Ruby about the memories and how Ruby's being so supportive! Hope Charlie remembers more soon... Quote
Barbara Posted May 16, 2010 Report Posted May 16, 2010 Aw they're spending some mother/daughter time. I had to laugh at Ruby being so excited to spend the day with her mum. I'm glad Charlie finally talk to someone about the memories she's been having. Like Ruby, I don't think she would cheat on Angelo with Jack. More please. Quote
charlie29 Posted May 16, 2010 Report Posted May 16, 2010 lovely chapter, I don't think Charlie cheated either, well I hope not! More soon Quote
TelephotoMarigold Posted May 16, 2010 Report Posted May 16, 2010 Great work. I love how you've interwovern the memories in with the story. Love Tele xx Quote
Inactive User Posted May 17, 2010 Author Report Posted May 17, 2010 (edited) Great chapter. Loved the Charlie/Ruby bonding Edited May 17, 2010 by ~JarlieFanEver~ Quote
Laura158 Posted May 18, 2010 Report Posted May 18, 2010 Awww.. I liked the ending! Their going on a date! Glad Charlie didn't have an affair.. I thought she might be working undercover Great Chapter, More soon please Quote
Barbara Posted May 18, 2010 Report Posted May 18, 2010 And now I still don't know why Jack and Charlie were working undercover. But I'm glad she knows she didn't have an affair and she remembered Angelo's birthday. He might not get a 'real' present but a kiss and a date with the woman he loves is an awesome gift IMO. More please. Quote
charlie29 Posted May 18, 2010 Report Posted May 18, 2010 yippee they're going on a date!! More more more!! Quote
Hannah-K Posted May 18, 2010 Report Posted May 18, 2010 so gald charlie and jack didn't have an affair! ahh they are going on a date more soon please Quote
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