Inactive User Posted May 31, 2010 Report Posted May 31, 2010 Great chapter Plz don't tell me Liam is cheating on Ruby with Marilyn?! What a jerk Aww Charlie pregnant again More soon pleasee
callyha Posted May 31, 2010 Report Posted May 31, 2010 Aww great chapter! lol Angelo so sure he and Charlie are having a girl so sweet! Liam cheat on Ruby? better not -Charlie and Angelo will get him lol! More soon Please
Laura158 Posted May 31, 2010 Report Posted May 31, 2010 What! Liam cheating on Ruby with Marilyn??!!! Glad Angelo is so happy to be having a baby.. a girl to be exact! Good update
Red Ranger 1 Posted May 31, 2010 Report Posted May 31, 2010 Starting reading this just before I went away for the weekend, came back and there's three chapters!Some great stuff in there, liked Charlie's handling of Ruby's relationship with Liam, did he sleep with Marilyn, at least he seems to regret it a bit.You're handling all the relationships well.
ashleyjane Posted June 1, 2010 Report Posted June 1, 2010 Chapter 4 Charlie rings up ruby but it goes to answering machine. Hi rubz it's me charlie just wanted to ask if you want to come over for dinner with me and angelo we need to tell you something so please call back rubz I love you bye. Charlie sat on the lounge next to angelo and sighed than angelo puts his arm around her and says. Everything going to be alright charlie rubz is going to be so excited shes going to have a baby sister she might be alittle angry at first but she'll get over it and she will be so excited for us and our baby just wait and see ruby might just suprise us. Angelo said in a loving voice. Yeah maybe it's just isn't fair on her. Charlie said upsetingly. What do you mean. Angelo said puzzled. I mean I didn't look after her I wasn't a mother to her and I should of been one to her it wasn't her fault she didn't know anything about us for 16 years I was a bad mother to her what if she gets jealous or upset or something like that angelo it's not fair on rubz. Charlie. Angelo said while starting to rub her arm in reansurance. You wasn't at fault and you wasn't a bad mother you was doing the best thing for ruby do you think ruby and you would be so close, do you think you'll be here right know, do you think you could raise a child and work and do you think she knowing you had her at 14 she would of asked you who was her father and then you having to tell her what he did to you you could of got hurt if she contacted Grant it was the best thing to do and she knows it and she still love you for it. Yeah I guess but hopefully she'll think of it, if I lose her again I don't know what i'll do. you want you just wait and see. And said and gave her a kiss. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Liam was walking on the beach when he saw a girl that he had a affair with and she ran over and gave him a hug. Bella what are you doing here I thought you want back to Italy. Liam said while looking around making sure no one he knew or ruby saw. My mum and dad said I can come back to summerbay to live and I have to go to school ofcourse at summerbay high isn't that great. Bella said in her Italian axcent. No no no you don't have to go to school at sumerbay high what about summerbay heights catholic school it's so much better than that dump. No silly I want to be with you and I think music is my faviourite already Mr murphey. Bella you cant tell anyone about us because the wont understand you have to promice you wont tell anyone even if you make a bff you cant tell anyone. Ok. Bella said and gave liam a kiss. Liam. Ruby screamed while running down the beach waving a paper around. Whats that rubz. This is a A my first A ever if I was mum I would of got a million of these already. Ruby said in an hypo voice. Ruby your the most smartest girl I know so don't try to compare yourself to your mother. I'm not but I sorta wish I was her sometimes. I don't want want her be you because I dont love her I love you. I love you to. Ruby said and gave liam a hug. I see you tomorrow at school rubz. Not if I see you first. Ok bye. Previous chapters to come: will bella tell ruby, how will ruby act to charlies news and what gender will be charlie's and angelo's baby.
Hannah-K Posted June 1, 2010 Report Posted June 1, 2010 this is really good, i cant wait to read more!
Red Ranger 1 Posted June 1, 2010 Report Posted June 1, 2010 Oh gosh, Liam certainly gets around, doesn't he?Why do I have the feeling there's going to be trouble here...
Danni02 Posted June 1, 2010 Report Posted June 1, 2010 Oh my goodness, Liam I hope Ruby is okay with Charlie's pregnancy. Update soon
Inactive User Posted June 1, 2010 Report Posted June 1, 2010 Great chapter Grrr Liam! Hope Ruby takes the news well that she's going to be a big sister. More soon please
callyha Posted June 1, 2010 Report Posted June 1, 2010 Good update, hate Liam Hope Ruby takes Changelo's news well more soon please
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