Red Ranger 1 Posted June 6, 2010 Report Posted June 6, 2010 Oh boy, Ruby's still upset about the pregnancy.I hope Charlie doesn't do something stupid to try and please her.
Danni02 Posted June 6, 2010 Report Posted June 6, 2010 Oh man. I really hope Charlie doesnt terminate this pregnancy just because Ruby wants her too. She cant let her 17 year old daughter tell her what to do! I can get why Ruby would be upset about it but I cant believe she could be so selfish as to make Charlie get rid of the baby! Update soon
callyha Posted June 6, 2010 Report Posted June 6, 2010 Can't believe Ruby is still upset. Charlie better not terminate the pregnancy! More soon please
lollypop Posted June 6, 2010 Report Posted June 6, 2010 I know this is a terrible thing to say...but if I were Ruby, I would be asking Charlie to have a termination too. The idea of a mini Angelo running around is unbearable!! Considering I cant stand the one that's already in Summer Bay. Anyways good work, I like the general storyline you've come up with. Maybe just think about seperating the dialogue more because sometimes it's hard to understand where the speaking parts begin and end. But other than that great job.
Inactive User Posted June 6, 2010 Report Posted June 6, 2010 Great chapter Grrr cant believe Ruby is soo selfish wanting her mother to get rid of the baby Hope Angelo may knock some sense into Ruby More soon please
ashleyjane Posted June 8, 2010 Report Posted June 8, 2010 Chapter 8 Angelo was running after charlie. Charlie. Angelo yelled but keeped on running away than he catched up to her and took a hold of her. You can't get rid of our baby girl. Angelo said. Yes I can i'm not ruining mine and rubys realationship again. charlie replied. Your not ruby is. No I am if I have this baby i'm not having it you only saying it because you want ot keep this baby. No i'm not charlie it's the truth if ruby really loves you she will forgive you she has befor. This time is different. This is not as big as your rubys mother. Yes it is because ruby want to be my child and she doesn't want share me and this isn't your decision anyway it's mine. How isn't this my decision this is my child your going to kill. I'm not killing our child. Yes you are it's alive in you charlie your going to regret this decision. No i'm not ruby number one to me and she always will this baby never going to be number one it's going to be numer 3 to me. Ha. Rubys number one, your number 2 and the baby number three. Charlie. Angelo. Charlie this is serious. Just quit it because we're not keeping this baby. Than angelo walked away. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Angelo was walking beside the when he spotted ruby. Ruby. Angelo screamed. Yeah dad. Ruby said. Don't call me dad. Why. Ruby said looking upset. Because your making charlie terminate her pregnancy that's really selfish ruby. No it's not. Yes it is. Do you know what selfish not telling your daughter that she's your daughter. Atlease carlie has a good reason you know hwta happened to her when she was really young. So. So you should be more symphetic and stop being so selfish. You don't know how it's like to be nothing to your mother. Ruby your number one to charlie. Yeah right. Yeah you are she even told me she said to me you was number one to her I was number 2 to her and the baby number three to her. Yeah right you your probably just saying it so you'se can be happy family without me. Ruby your always going be apart of our family your going to be our baby no matter what. Than ruby just stood there. I better go angelo said.
Red Ranger 1 Posted June 8, 2010 Report Posted June 8, 2010 Glad Angelo bawled out Ruby over her attitude, hopefully it'll have some sort of effect on her and she'll stop Charlie.
Inactive User Posted June 8, 2010 Report Posted June 8, 2010 Glad Angelo knocked some sense into Ruby! You go, Angelo! Hope she realises what Angelo said was true and she will stop Charlie getting rid of the baby. More soon pleaseee
Danni02 Posted June 8, 2010 Report Posted June 8, 2010 Liked Angelo talking to Ruby. Hopefully this will make her see sense and she wont make Charlie get rid of the baby!
Laura158 Posted June 8, 2010 Report Posted June 8, 2010 I'm glad Angelo finally gave Ruby a bit of a reality check! She's being a bit selfish and just needs to talk to Charlie calmly about it.... Good update, and as lollypop commented about spreading the dialogue out- it's easier to read
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