Danni02 Posted June 15, 2010 Report Posted June 15, 2010 Aww Xavier, lol. I thought it was kinda sweet he wanted to check up on them. Also thinking Bella is going to regret getting back with Liam. Update soon
Inactive User Posted June 15, 2010 Report Posted June 15, 2010 Great chapter Loved how Xavier went to check on Charlie and Ruby. So sweet I think Bella is making a mistake getting together with Liam More soon please ;)
carywary Posted June 15, 2010 Report Posted June 15, 2010 Aww wee Xavier! That was so nice that he wanted to check up on them in the middle of the night. Keep up the good work, really enjoying this.
Laura158 Posted June 15, 2010 Report Posted June 15, 2010 Great Update, I liked how Xavier came in the middle of the night to check on Ruby and Charlie! So nice! Also it made me smile when Charlie told Angelo to stop thinking and go to sleep when he wasn't even thinking out loud or anything! She just knew! Don't think its very good that Bella's with Liam again...
callyha Posted June 15, 2010 Report Posted June 15, 2010 aww Xavier! how cute! when Charlie knew Angelo was thinking about the baby! More soon please
ashleyjane Posted June 16, 2010 Report Posted June 16, 2010 Chapter 13 Bella and liam was walking on the beach with a awkward silence between till bella started to talk. "So are you going to jail". Bella asked curiously. "I don't know my trials in acouple of weeks". Liam said than looked to the ocean."ruby, charlie and angelo are lying that charlie and angelo didn't give us permission they don't even have to lie either way it's not up to them because even if you get the parents permission it doesn't count it's not up to them the child or anyone it's just the law a stupid dumb law". "No defence but I can sorta I get why they are lying because you did break rubys heart". "Yeah I guess but also befor anything happened when I hit charlie angelo was bashing me because I cheated on ruby". Yeah but remember she his daughter". "He's her step father not even step father yet". "Yeah but he wants her to be his daughter and ruby calls him dad and everything". "Hows girlfriend are you rubys or mine". "Yours but I can see their side ok so top bugging me". Bella walked away and liam chasing after her till ruby came running down screaming. "Get away from her". Ruby said trying to defend bella. "No she's my girlfriend. Liam just stood there and was looking at ruby how looked like she just saw a ghost". "What is this true bella". Ruby screamed. "Yes ruby but I want us to be friends still". "I cant believe this". Then ruby put her hands on her head than put them down."You know he's just using you to not go to jail for sleeping with you and the only other reasons is to sleep with you that's all your good for, for him". "He loves me". "He's only saying it he told me that too". "He said he only told you that because he didn't want to hurt your feeling". "I know he was only saying that to get in my pant like he's doing to you he can't love the only person that he loves is himself". "Ruby that's enough". Liam put his hand her shoulder than ruby swang his hand of her shulder. "Don't touch me and don't touch bella ever again". Than ruby grabbed bellas hand and draged her away. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Charlie was at the hospital waiting for angelo for her first altrasound because angelo said he'll ber there. "Charlie we are going to have to start very soon because I have other patients". Rachelle said. "Yeah ok just give angelo five more minutes he is very excited for this baby". Charlie told. "Ok but if he...". Then she got interupted by angelo running in. "Sorry rach there was alot of traffic". Angelo expained. "Ok". Than rachelle starts the altra sound. "The babies are fine". "Babies that means theirs more than one". "Yeah thats right and they are two healthy baby girls". Angelo just lit up."Girls you better not be trying to get my hopes up". "Angelo only wanted girls there was no exception for boys he wanted them to be healthy and all". "But he just wanted girls I can understand that I had a patient husband once hoping it was a boy and when the girl came out he was so dissapointed and he divorced his wife and doesn't have anything to do with his daughter shes dead to him because she's a girl". "Charlie you don't have to worry about that. Angelo said. "Good because if you ever done that to me I would do stuff to you that made you wish you didn't mess with me". Charlie replied. "Is that a promice". Angelo said playfully. "Yes it is". "Good because if ever done that I give you permission". "I don't need any permision". Then charlie and angelo started to kiss passionately. "Yuk guys don't do it infront of me". But charlie and angelo didn't pay any attension so rachelle walked away. Charlie and angelo walked back to angelo and they walked into the kitchen. "Angelo you know how you was talking about us moving in together". "Yeah". "I think i'm ready". "Really". "Really". Angelo just spun her around than grabbed her arm and led her to the bedroom.
Danni02 Posted June 16, 2010 Report Posted June 16, 2010 Aww twins girls, how cute. And Charlie is ready to move in with him! yey. Update soon
Inactive User Posted June 16, 2010 Report Posted June 16, 2010 Great chapter And wow it's good to see you improving your writing Awww Changelo expecting twin girls, so cute. Wow Ruby is going to have her hands full running around after her two little sisters coz twins can get up to mischief, haha. Update soon x
carywary Posted June 16, 2010 Report Posted June 16, 2010 Another great update, i wonder if this will be the end of Bella and Liam?? Awk twins, that's lovely, they can settle down and be a wee family now!!
Red Ranger 1 Posted June 16, 2010 Report Posted June 16, 2010 Good that Charlie and Angelo are excited about the baby now.Liam still comes across as slightly victimised, even if he is probably playing Bella.
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