Laura158 Posted July 7, 2010 Report Posted July 7, 2010 Fantastic few updates! Sorry I haven't commented for a while but I've just caught up and I want to say that I think its really good. Not to happy about Bella and Liam obviously but I am loving how Charlie and Angelo are moving in together - with Ruby I think it is really nice that Xavier is concerned about Ruby and Charlie! I would be to I imagine if I was having those dreams! Great work!
ashleyjane Posted July 19, 2010 Report Posted July 19, 2010 Sorry for not writting for ages but i've been busy and sorry this is only get to be a short chapter... Chapter 16 Charlie grabbed angelos hand as they started to walk up the drive way. "Charlie babe theres nothing to be scared of". "Yeah I know I just wanted to hold your hand". "Ok then thats ok then". Angelo said cheekily and gave her a peck on the cheak and they walked into the house. "So this is how it feels like to move in with some one". "Yeah it is does it feel good". "Yeah it feels great". "So we better un pack yours and ruby's stuff then". Than ruby walks in with both hands full and and the handle of a bag in her mout "allittle help pleas". Ruby said still in her mouth". "What did you say ruby you want me and charlie to relax while you get everything and unpack that is so nice of you". Angelos said jokingly and charlie couldn't help but laugh. "No I said I need some help". ruby said angrily. "I know I was just joking". And he grabbed three bags of her. "No
Red Ranger 1 Posted July 19, 2010 Report Posted July 19, 2010 Awww, that was a cute little chapter.Loved Charlie's nervousness and Ruby struggling with the cases was a funny moment.
ashleyjane Posted July 20, 2010 Report Posted July 20, 2010 Chapter 17 "So I think we should call it a day". Angelo told. "Ok i'm getting abit sleepy anyway". Charlie answered as charlie turned around angelo grabbed her hand and spun her around and kissed her passionately but charlie pulled away." Angelo i'm sleepy I want to go to bed to go to sleep I promice i'll make it up to you tomorrow". "Ok you can go to bed i'm jut going to unpack more stuff". "I thought you was sleepy and thats why we was finishing up". "No I wanted go bed with you I didn't want to sleep". Angelo said and grabbed her hands. "You go to bed babe i'll see you in the morning and be prepared to be surprised". "No if I knew you was going go to bed and sleep aswell I wouldn't of go to be and let you do more unpacking i'm staying up with you and unpack the other stuff". Charlie said firmly. Angelo put his hands on both of charlies shoulders. "Charlie it's fine I can stay up and do more unpacking ok we need to get as much as we can get done us arguing how staying up and unpacking isn't going to unpack the stuff". Then angelo kisses charlies forrad."Go to bed charlie your sleepy". "Ok if your sure". "I'm sure". Then charlie walked out the room and angelo starts unpacking more. ~~~ Bella walks into the dinner."Hey liam". Bella said and gave him a kiss on the head and sat down across from him. "Bella today I just found out whens my courtday". Liam than paused. "So when is it". "Two week from tomorrow". "That quick". "Yes that quick I assualted and slept was a 16 year old kid". "I know I just didn't think it come this quick". "Yeah me neither". "So what are you thinking rite now". "I'm thinking that if ruby didn't get promoted to charlies daughter none of this would of ever happened". "Liam you know charlie loved ruby as an daughter even if ruby didn't know she was her mum remember charlie got raped if I got raped I wouldn't of even kept the kid in the family". "Yeah I know i'm just abit angry that's all, cya tommorrow I have to go". Than Liam kissed her on the head and left a very distraught bella by herself.
Red Ranger 1 Posted July 20, 2010 Report Posted July 20, 2010 Hmm, not sure what to make of Liam's reaction there.Interested to see what happens.
callyha Posted July 20, 2010 Report Posted July 20, 2010 Nice couple of Updates. More soon please, I like this fic
ashleyjane Posted July 24, 2010 Report Posted July 24, 2010 Chapter 18 Charlie woke up and saw angelo starring at her stroking her hair softly and then she mumbled. 'What are you doing angelo'. 'Just waiting for my beautiful girlfriend to wake up and have her breakfast in bed'.Angelo replied briefly. 'What did I do to diserve this it should of been me who done this for you'. 'For being the most beautifulest girlfriend and mother to be'. 'In that case I should be getting use to this'.She joked around. 'And thats not all of your surprise". 'What is it angelo'. Charlie sat up like a kid at christmas. 'I was going to give you this sooner but her it is'. Angelo grabbed the rectangle box out of the dresser that was next to their bed and than he opened the box and there it was a gold locket.'Do you like it because if you don't i'll exchange it for or something'. Angelo glazed at charlie. 'I even picked it out my self I didn't get ruby or any one to help pick it out'. Charlie replied.'I don't like it'. 'I'm sorry charlie i'll get....'. 'No angelo I love it'. 'Thats great I actually done something right and charlie look inside the locket'. Than charlie opened up the locket and saw a picture of her, angelo and ruby and just starred at it. 'It perfect angelo like you are'. Than charlie started to kiss angelo than it got more passionate between them even though angelo didn't want to stop he knew they had to so angelo broke free. 'Angelo I was going to make it up to you today why stop it we was just getting into it'. 'You have a doctors appointment in 45 minutes so you better eat your breakfast and get ready did you forget'. 'No'. 'Charlie'. 'Yes I forgot'. 'Ok meet me and ruby in the car in half an hour' 'Ok sweety'. As she kissed him. FOURTY FIVE MINTUES LATER. Rachell was looking at the screen. 'O oh'. 'O oh what the baby ok isn't it'. Charlie replied. 'Yes everyin fine chalie i's just I got the sex wrong instead of two girls theres one girl and one boy'. Angelo didn't look happy than. 'What but you said it was twin girls how can you just lie and get my hopes up for girls'. Angelo spat. 'Angelo'. Charlie screamed at what he just said 'Angelo I didn't lie to you'se I just accidentally gave you'se the wrong information i'm soory for getting your hopes up and why don't you want a son anyways'. 'Because I never had sisters only brothers and I know how brothers are and I just want daughter and know your saying i'm only have two daughters and a son it should be three daugters and no son'. 'Angelo I wish I had a brother or a sister this is great for me because know I have two daughters and a son'. 'So know you tell me that you've been wishing for a boy no wonder we're having a boy know you cursed us'. Angelo yealched and walked out of the room as ruby followed after him to come back while leaving charlie to cry. 'Angelo'. Ruby screamed but angelo just ignored and walked away.
callyha Posted July 24, 2010 Report Posted July 24, 2010 Nice update. that locket with the three of them in was so cute! A boy and a girl. Ooh, Angelo not happy! Bless him, having his heart set on twin girls. Didn't expect the reaction we got lol. But still great! More soon please
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