HighwayUnicorn Posted June 26, 2010 Author Report Posted June 26, 2010 (edited) Deleted. Edited September 14, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote
tessalove Posted June 26, 2010 Report Posted June 26, 2010 That was such a good chapter!! I really loved the end bit! It was written so well! El xx Quote
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Danni02 Posted June 28, 2010 Report Posted June 28, 2010 Great couple of updates. I like Miles and Nicole's talk. You wrote everyone's emotions well. I am looking forward to more. Quote
tessalove Posted June 28, 2010 Report Posted June 28, 2010 That was a great chapter.. I feel so sorry for both Nic & Aden.. I wondered if anything will spark between them!! Update soon, EL x Quote
Barbara Posted June 28, 2010 Report Posted June 28, 2010 Miles put his hands together and gave a slight bow.“Just call me your fairy godmother.Or something equally cool but a bit more manly.”He suddenly caught sight of the buffet.“Ooh, dips.”He hurried over there. That's something I can imagine him saying on the show. You killed Roman! Yes, you're evil! They were having such a lovely day and it had to end like that. I wonder who killed him. My guesses would also have been Elliott and Gardy. It was nice of Aden to stay in the Bay and support Nicole. Maybe Roman's death will bring them closer together or they could at least be friends again. More please. Quote
Danni02 Posted July 1, 2010 Report Posted July 1, 2010 First Roman and now Justin, poor Aden. I expected they would end up in bed together at one point but didnt think it would be so quick. Looking forward to more of this. Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted July 1, 2010 Author Report Posted July 1, 2010 (edited) Deleted. Edited September 14, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote
Barbara Posted July 1, 2010 Report Posted July 1, 2010 Justin died as well! How awful! The fact it happened so close after Roman's death makes it even worse. Poor Aden! How is he going to get through this? I wasn't expecting Nicole and Aden to sleep together straight away but it makes sense in a way. It's how they comforted each other when Roman was blind. But could it have been more than comfort sex? Aden seemed disappointed that Nicole wanted to leave straight away. Looking forward to the next chapter. Quote
tessalove Posted July 1, 2010 Report Posted July 1, 2010 OMG!! Poor Aden, His life is kinda of falling apart right now, first his father figure and then his brother! I wonder how he will take that, I hope Nic can be there for him! Great chapter! El x Quote
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