A Summer Bay Wedding II (by TelephotoMarigold) - comments

[rocknroll]

great updates

really loved Geoff and Nic, their really cute

update soon xx

[pollymoon]

Just caught up on all those lovely parts and I have loved everyone of them, never expected Cookie to die though

great to see interaction with all the kids though and now we have some trouble again with Roman and Ella, she really does put him through the ringer at times, can't wait to read more, once again tele, just brilliant

[pollymoon]

another great part Tele, am interested to know what was wrong with Roman though and I love all the interaction with the kids, can't wait for more

[Laura158]

I've just finished reading all the fictions leading up to this one and I want to say they are fantastic!

I loved them - I was addicted It took me a long time to read them but it was definitely worth it!

I like how you've created a story with a few main central characters to begin with and have added in other characters which are unknown- in terms of home and away.

I also like how you've created a story with children in it. I really enjoy reading the happenings of the children and often had trouble keeping track of them all!

Onto the fiction at the momment, I think it's lovely how Mike and Danni are going to get married and love how you've made Ella become such a strong character. I hope Roman and her sort out their problems this time... but I have a feeling that as soon as they do something else drastic will happen

Anyway I love it and keep up the great work!

[pollymoon]

Brilliant tele, great to see Mike and Ella spending time together and finding some more about their time before Roman, love this story.

[Laura158]

Great update!

I like the mother son bonding going on between Ella and Mike

Shows real understanding..written well

[Scotcaz22]

Loved it!

[pollymoon]

Well Tele, you have just made everyone's day I think, what a wonderful part and speaking for myself, think I am also jealous reading all the loving between Roman and Ella, think we all need a roman, Brilliant

[pollymoon]

Another great part Tele, I just love Lily she makes me smile, love the closeness that Roman and Ella have at the moment, brilliant part.

[pollymoon]

Another great part tele, you are putting us through it here, wish they would sit down and talk about what they are feeling, still love it though