Laura158 Posted November 10, 2010 Author Report Posted November 10, 2010 Fantastic update! I really liked the part with all the kids coming out of school. It really showed their personalities - I hope Ella lets Marcus come over. While I don't like Martha I quite like Marcus. I have a feeling he's missed out on all of the family type activities. Really liked the bit of Ruby, Nicole and Annie - there friendship is really strong Fantastic work! Can't wait for more! Quote
pollymoon Posted November 10, 2010 Report Posted November 10, 2010 Thank you tele for a beautiful part between Roman and Ella, I so love seeing them like this together and I so hope they get their girls back soon, lily is a bit of a madam but you just have to love her, can't wait for more. Quote
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pollymoon Posted November 11, 2010 Report Posted November 11, 2010 Tele once again another great part, great to see Toby part of the family and lily is such a character I really enjoy her, I really hope that they find their babies and that they are ok, this is such a brilliant story and I love it. Quote
Laura158 Posted November 11, 2010 Author Report Posted November 11, 2010 Amazing! I loved when Tobias came to meet them all ! and Ella surfing - she really sacrificed a lot for her family! Brilliant work I really can't wait for more p.s. I like the happy family chapters try to keep them like that for a while eh? Quote
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Laura158 Posted November 14, 2010 Author Report Posted November 14, 2010 Amazing as usual! I liked Tobias talking with Leah - the bit with Ella's note! That made me smile. I wonder if it's Amy Belle he walked into?? The ending with Sophie and the babies was really cute I liked when Sophie said "If we get to know him it won’t be so big a shock if he is Daddy’s." It was so sweet, I really like Sophie, how all the kids are so understanding. Also the last bit she said " we know that it might not be very nice for you but when we figured out who Marcus was we thought you’d like him anyway because he’s really like shy" It's said that it made Ella cry but I imagine Sophie's a little be right - that Ella will learn to like Marcus Fantastic work! Loved every bit Quote
pollymoon Posted November 15, 2010 Report Posted November 15, 2010 Great part tele. really like toby and is there going to be something with amy belle,l poor elle and sophie is becoming so grown up, think we will need an age reminder again, i still think of her as a little girl, brilliant once again. Quote
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