pollymoon Posted November 16, 2010 Report Posted November 16, 2010 Well done tele, another great chapter, that was really lovely between Roman and Ella, carina is right, you write so beautifully, well done Quote
pollymoon Posted November 17, 2010 Report Posted November 17, 2010 Brilliant Tele, great to see Toby getting to meet everyone, hopefully now that Roman knows he can persuade amy belle to tell her parents, I just love seeing everyone together, really loving this story Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted November 17, 2010 Report Posted November 17, 2010 (edited) Deleted. Edited October 5, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote
Laura158 Posted November 17, 2010 Author Report Posted November 17, 2010 Amazing! Toby seems to be really fitting in with the family well. If I was in his shoes I would not be able to remember all their names! It's such a big family with so many generations I like the full name call bit, where Sammy and Meggy both stopped and came to him immediately! I hope Amy-Belle tells her parents soon! Otherwise it'll get back to them some other way. I can see Amy-Belle and Toby working well together... Fantastic work! Can't wait for more Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted November 20, 2010 Report Posted November 20, 2010 (edited) Deleted. Edited October 5, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted November 22, 2010 Report Posted November 22, 2010 (edited) Deleted. Edited October 5, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote
pollymoon Posted November 22, 2010 Report Posted November 22, 2010 Just brilliant tele, 2 great parts, thank god that Gabby is ok, but please tell me that Ella isn't going to leave roman again, hope pete and jacko can get to the bottom of this before Roman and Ella go beyond staying together, brilliant writing once again. Quote
saraz Posted November 24, 2010 Report Posted November 24, 2010 Hi, I am loving this fan fiction but can you please tells how old each of the kids are at this point of the story? Thanks Sarah Quote
pollymoon Posted November 24, 2010 Report Posted November 24, 2010 Another brilliant part Tele, you can almost feel the fear of them going anywhere in case he is around, I really hope that hey catch him soon, hate to see them like this, I hope he hasn't done anything to the babies, can't wait for the next part. Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted November 24, 2010 Report Posted November 24, 2010 (edited) Deleted. Edited October 5, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote
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