Broken (by TelephotoMarigold) - comments

[pollymoon]

another great part Tele, they really are going to have to do something with Marcus, poor ella is exhausted and they really need to find out if Roman is the dad and why did Martha just leave him like that, I just adore Lily, can't wait for more.

[HighwayUnicorn]

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[HighwayUnicorn]

What can I say? I must sound so repetetive in every post but yeah, I loved it as per usual.

Well done & I look forward to more.

Love Carina xxx

[pollymoon]

Loved it Tele, great to see them all together, feel sorry for marcus cos I don't really want him to be Roman's but at the same time I don't want him to be with Martha either and he seems such a nice child, so you have me confused, I hate to think that Roman may have slept with Martha, oh tele you need to put us out of our misery.

[HighwayUnicorn]

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[kitkat1992]

Poor Ella and poor Roman...Martha is so horrible, she knows exactly how to provoke a reaction and using her son to get to Roman is just awful.

I hope they find Ella and that she is ok

Look forward to more

[HighwayUnicorn]

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[pollymoon]

just catching up now tele, only back at work today due to weather, just loved having all those parts to read, I could kill Martha for what she did to them, I really hope that Roman and Ella can sort themselves out, looking forward to the next part.