Broken (by TelephotoMarigold) - comments

[Laura158]

Great 2 updates!

I think my favourite part is when all the children are together and interacting! I love those bits

It's good that Ella's home, just in time for christmas for the sound of it. I think it is good how she went away for a while, to stop her fighting with Roman all the time. I think they should do that more often. Stay speaking nicely and spend some time for themselves and with the individual kids.

Fantastic work, I really love reading this

[HighwayUnicorn]

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[pollymoon]

Just brilliant Tele, just catching up now, just brilliant, wonder will Martha do the right thing before she dies and tells ella exactly what happened with Roman, think it is more like the idea that she drugged him cos I really don't believe that he slept with her willingly, hope they find their babies soon, just can't wait to read more.

[Laura158]

Awww that was a fabulous chapter! I loved it

Ella is so nice and clever! I didn't realise that when she asked Martha how long, that she was refering to cancer! How on earth did Ella realise that?

I liked how Roman is going to be Marcus' father whether or not he actually is. That's sweet

This has been one of my favourite chapters, it is so touching to think that Ella would do that for Martha and Marcus. Well Done

[HighwayUnicorn]

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[pollymoon]

Oh Tele, that was just amazing, just loved every word of it, I love seeing them so happy like this, I hope it lasts and I really hope that Roman gets his christmas wish and that they get their babies back. Just brilliant

[HighwayUnicorn]

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[Laura158]

Great Update

Ella is so smart! I liked how she explained how she worked it out! She had me puzzled - as per my last comment - of how she worked it out. She's a clever cookie!

They're going to have a great christmas. I think all the children will like their presents

I wonder whether Martha is getting any presents?

Fantastic work! I loved it, can't wait for the christmas day!

[HighwayUnicorn]

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[pollymoon]

brilliant, i loved it but what did roman give ella or am i not reading it right, loved the whole thing though and was delighted to see an update today, finishng work now and off till wedneday.

Happy new year to everyone