pollymoon Posted January 27, 2011 Report Posted January 27, 2011 Brilliant Tele, another great part, we want happy roman and ella though, grumpy Roman in the morning and after she being nice and letting him lie in. Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted January 29, 2011 Report Posted January 29, 2011 (edited) Deleted. Edited October 5, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote
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pollymoon Posted January 31, 2011 Report Posted January 31, 2011 just catching up now tele after the weekend and I loved it, hate when roman and ella fight but love when they make up, looks like we won't have long to wait for Gabby's baby, wonder what she will have, love this story so much and you know Tele that I will keep coming back if when you ban me, I am you no one fan, you can't keep banning me Quote
Laura158 Posted January 31, 2011 Author Report Posted January 31, 2011 Wow! AMAZING updates I’ve returned home recently and had so many chapters to read! 11 in fact! Which goes to show how often you update Was a bit worried at first when you said you were going away- but then you came back! I hope you had a lovely time in Spain. So here it goes.. all the chapters I missed Chapter 83 I liked the idea about the wallpaper. That's sweet. Glad Fleur is able to come home soon to her amazing family. Chapter 84 Ella did well to leave the kids on the beach alone, apart from freaking out about Sammy. You displayed her emotions perfectly. Lily, Liam, Meggy, Sophie and Roman in the water together was cute! Chapter 85 Oh no! Gardener! Can't believe Roman didn't see him with her. I don't believe Meggy's Gardy's, I think it's to make them doubt each other and fight like they work out later. Chapter 86 Loved the bit with Sophie wearing the bikini and Roman's reaction to it. Bit worried about the DNA test but I'm sure Ella and Roman won't do anything to hurt Meggy. Chapter 87 Sammy and the bad dream was cute. The kids are all too adorable! Chapter 88 Glad Ella and Roman got a chance to relax when surfing - they need it! Gabby must be due soon? It made me laugh with Lily and the word baby! Chapter 89 It's funny to think Roman's a great grandfather! How old is he now? I think it is good that Ella's not pregnant, they don't need any more trouble. Chapter 90 I hope Amy- Belle names the baby soon! I liked when Roman went all soldier to Mike and Jacko. It made me laugh! I loved the bit the babies and Millie calling Miles dad! Chapter 91 Drunk Roman is so funny, but he said some nice things, being very truthful. Big parties at Ella's always seem to end with the men drunk! Coincidence? Or not? Nice idea to make the quilts. Chapter 92 I loved how the kids know what Roman is doing wrong when even he doesn't know! This has been one of my favourite parts! Chapter 93 I loved how Lily had to inspect the room! It was so cute. Glad Ella finally told Sophie about the events round her birth. Sophie is so grown up now! Chapter 94 I'm sure Sophie and Georgie will be fine at high school. Fleur's home! Yay! Shame Roman and Ella still continue to fight. From reading and commenting on all of this I have come to the conclusion that you are the best writer of fan fictions ever! Seriously you do an amazing job expressing emotions and telling strong and emotional storylines. Thankyou for writing this for us to read! Sorry for the long comment Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted January 31, 2011 Report Posted January 31, 2011 (edited) Deleted. Edited October 5, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote
pollymoon Posted February 1, 2011 Report Posted February 1, 2011 Brilliant Tele but then I wasn't expecting anything else, just loved the end of it and as I was thinking that everything between them was so controlled and then you once again surprise us with that ending, all the comments about you are correct, you are an amazing writer and I just love your stories. Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted February 1, 2011 Report Posted February 1, 2011 (edited) Deleted. Edited October 5, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote
Laura158 Posted February 1, 2011 Author Report Posted February 1, 2011 Thanks for the I really liked this chapter, it's good to see that Fleur's settling in well to the family life. Routine sounds like a good idea, the calender is so organised! Roman's version made me laugh I think the surfing should be on the actual calendar though. I agree with Carina, I think you write the interactions between everyone amazingly! Looking forward to some more Quote
kitkat1992 Posted February 1, 2011 Report Posted February 1, 2011 This update was so sweet I love the interaction between Lily and her parents. Roman and the calendar was fantastic and the way Ella didn't just delete what he wrote was really good. Can't wait for more Quote
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