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omg....you cant leave it there.....please dont leave it there!!!!!!!!!!

such a good chapter and such a good story as a whole, i always enjoy reading the updates.

sequel?????

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Just read the last few chapters! O god, such a good job I know you posted the start of the next fic otherwise there would be possible death threats!

Amazing as always tele!

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I don't know what to say. :huh:

You cannot kill both Roman and Ella. It is not fair, you must make them be okay!!

But other than that horrible cliff hanger ending. It was an amazing story! :wub:

While I can't believe how much it's changed since I last read it!

I'm glad they got August back and that she is okay. I can't believe Martha's involved and that she's been using Marcus as a spy! How horrible. And there is so many other parts I want to comment on but, I think the comment would become too long!

You write everyone's emotions perfectly, I can't begin to describe how much I love this story, you make me become so emotionally connected to these characters it's amazing. :) How do you do it? I feel as if I know all the characters personally and that if I met them out on the street I would know all about their past and history.

I hope you will be writing another, you cannot absolutely leave it there!!

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