Broken (by TelephotoMarigold) - comments

[Laura158]

Great Update

Ella can be really frustrating at times! If she's going to be angry all the time than what the point of getting the babies back - because she doesn't seem to be wanting to spend any time with her other kids!

Loved the tickling part

Fantastic work

Can't wait for more

[HighwayUnicorn]

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[HighwayUnicorn]

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[Laura158]

Aww fantastic! The bit with Sammy was cute

Oh no Dr Andrews is dead.... hopefully something good will come of that!

Great work, I can't wait for more

[pollymoon]

Tele, I am back and just spent the last while catching up and I can tell you that I loved every minute of it, just pure brilliance, what a story, just loving every minute of it.

[TelephotoMarigold]

Tele, I am back and just spent the last while catching up and I can tell you that I loved every minute of it, just pure brilliance, what a story, just loving every minute of it.

That it... I work my fingers to the bone typing up a lot of updates for you and all I get is one line.... huh!

I bet you didn't even bring me back a present from your holiday.....

That's it your barred... stop reading right now.... go on stop.... no more Rola for you...

[pollymoon]

Tele, you will have to forgive me, I am sorry about the one line but I was reading that story all morning when I should have been working so my time was limited, so I will try again now, Tele, I have just caught up with all your parts and I just loved it, all the sad parts, the happy parts, the angry parts and I can't tell you how thrilled I am that there is a chance that their little girls are alive, I just hope they can find them, I also can't wait for Martha to be put in her place, she is really annoying me, I hope that Tobias comes to see them, glad that Jacko is not going to cause trouble for ella and roman and that Aden and belle are sorting themselves out, I really hope that Amy belle will tell them her news think she may get a different reaction than what she thinks, really sorry that I didn't write all this earlier but i really was under pressure, brilliant story, brilliant writing, amazing storylines, tele you are an awesome talent.

[pollymoon]

That was beautiful tele, glad that Ruby and Xavier got sorted, now a man for annie and back please to our beautiful Roman and Ella, love all your characters but adore roman and ella

[HighwayUnicorn]

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