lino Posted October 18, 2009 Report Posted October 18, 2009 Thanks for the update. I love comedy in fanfics. Can't wait to read more. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 18, 2009 Author Report Posted October 18, 2009 (edited) Phew, she said yes!Great moment, loved Colleen willing them on.Is Brendan living in Summer Bay?I thought Gina was leaving town to see him but she was still there the next morning. Edited October 18, 2009 by Red Ranger 1 Quote
blizzard18 Posted October 18, 2009 Report Posted October 18, 2009 Sorry, should have made it a bit clearer. Brendan does live in Summer Bay and lives with Gina, Rachel and Tony at the Holden House. Gina left Brendan with a carer instead of taking him to the fundraiser/band (i.e. too many people, loud noise etc.) The hospital that he is in at the moment in the fic is the one where Rachel works. Also, when Hugo and Xavier arrive in the next chapter, they will also be living in the Holden House (Annexe part). Hope that's made it a bit clearer for you. Will post the next chapter soon. Quote
charmed60 Posted October 18, 2009 Report Posted October 18, 2009 Wohoo you updated early Hehe it was a really funny chapter, loved the whole Tony being passed out and drunken antics! And I'm so glad she said yes to the proposal, I liked how you built up the tension and had everyone willing her on to say yes. Poor Brendan I hope he's ok! Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 18, 2009 Author Report Posted October 18, 2009 blizzard18 said: Sorry, should have made it a bit clearer. Brendan does live in Summer Bay and lives with Gina, Rachel and Tony at the Holden House. Gina left Brendan with a carer instead of taking him to the fundraiser/band (i.e. too many people, loud noise etc.) The hospital that he is in at the moment in the fic is the one where Rachel works. Also, when Hugo and Xavier arrive in the next chapter, they will also be living in the Holden House (Annexe part). Hope that's made it a bit clearer for you. Will post the next chapter soon. Thanks for that, I was just wondering.Everything's clear now. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 19, 2009 Author Report Posted October 19, 2009 Curious about this Ray guy, is he going to end up playing a part in this?Nice bit of banter between Tony and Gina and between Gina and the boys.Looking forward to more of this. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 21, 2009 Author Report Posted October 21, 2009 Wow, lots of interesting stuff there.Who is this Kent guy and does he have anything to do with that phone call Charlie received?And what was in the letter?Tony's a rock fan... Quote
blizzard18 Posted October 21, 2009 Report Posted October 21, 2009 Glad you're finding it interesting, Red Ranger. By the way, in regards to Kent, all I can say is take a look back at Chapter One. There are more clues coming in the next few chapters and it will lead up eventually to (what I like to call) a "Cliffhanger" chapter. After that, the majority of the remaining chapters will focus mostly on the major storyline. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 21, 2009 Author Report Posted October 21, 2009 blizzard18 said: Glad you're finding it interesting, Red Ranger. By the way, in regards to Kent, all I can say is take a look back at Chapter One. Oh!Forgotten about that.Certainly opens up a number of possibilities... Quote
suzannelgnz Posted October 22, 2009 Report Posted October 22, 2009 I'm enjoying how this fic is progressing, the idea of a cliffhanger chapter sounds really good Quote
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