Inactive User Posted November 23, 2009 Report Posted November 23, 2009 I am enjoying this fanfiction. Uh oh! Gina is not going to be impressed when she finds out Charlie blabbed to Tony! Brendan is such a gentleman! I like him More soon please ;) Quote
Scotcaz22 Posted November 23, 2009 Report Posted November 23, 2009 Brilliant chapter. I like it how you inculded in some light comedy with Brendan, to keep us smiling and laughing as well as going awww and ohh at the sad things, if you know what I mean? LOL - oh dear, Gina's not going to be very happy to know that Tony has been told, but Tony's not going to be happy when he finds out that Jack and Gina knew and didn't tell him! What a mess! Looking forward to the next one! Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 23, 2009 Author Report Posted November 23, 2009 Glad Rachel understood and that Ruby smoothed things over with Xavier(even though it was wrong of her to hold on to that grudge).Gina still annoyed me by laying the law down to Jack but that cat's well and truly out of the bag now... Quote
blizzard18 Posted November 24, 2009 Report Posted November 24, 2009 Thanks everyone for your comments. More Drama still to come. Just to update what has been covered so far in this fic. MAIN STORYLINE: Tony's past. OTHER STORYLINES: (DONE) A Proposal: Tony and Rachel. A Ghost: Beth A Fire: The Warehouse Mystery Characters: Paul/Kent and Brenda OTHER STORYLINES: (IN PROGRESS/COMING SOON) A Robbery: Surf Club and Gym. Still in progress. An Illness: Brendan. Still in progress. A Family Feud: Starting soon. An Affair: Starting soon. A Resident to Say Goodbye to Summer Bay: Starting soon. Next chapter coming up Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 24, 2009 Author Report Posted November 24, 2009 Ohhh, looks like Jack's about to put his foot in it.What's Ray up to?What's Roman up to?Looking forward to more. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 25, 2009 Author Report Posted November 25, 2009 Glad that Martha shouted at Lucas, what Hugo did was dumb but they need to move on from it.Good that Jack told Tony everything, hopefully he'll be able to come to terms with it. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 26, 2009 Author Report Posted November 26, 2009 Bit worried about Ray's phone call, he seems to be getting a bit obsessed with Leah.Glad Martha gave Lucas a serve, loved Irene interrupting them.Have a feeling Gina and Hugo aren't going to get a very welcome reception at the hospital... Quote
Scotcaz22 Posted November 26, 2009 Report Posted November 26, 2009 Ohhh and the plot thickens around Ray and Leah...mmmm! Poor Gina and Hugo having to face Tony's wrath soon Great update as always! Quote
Scotcaz22 Posted November 27, 2009 Report Posted November 27, 2009 Who could be Tina? Ohhh, poor Tony - he's not having a good time is he? A great update and I'm looking forward to the next one! Quote
Scotcaz22 Posted November 27, 2009 Report Posted November 27, 2009 blizzard18 said: Tina is Constable Richard Dean's fiance, and also the blonde who Roman had admitted to having an affair with. I wrote Tina just as a one-time character, just to create friction between Charlie, Richard and Roman, which will develop into a small storyline of its own. She is in no way related to the main storyline. Hope I answered your question Oh, no, I meant who is Tina to Roman - that's what I meant! I just have this feeling that what Ruby saw was not what she thought what happened between Roman and Tina - but then I might be wrong, and it did turn out that they did have an affair! Or did I misread and they did have an affair?? LOL! Anyway, a great update as always...awww I feel so sorry for Tony! And for Gina & Hugo! Quote
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