Inactive User Posted December 2, 2009 Report Posted December 2, 2009 Great chapter. More soon please Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted December 3, 2009 Author Report Posted December 3, 2009 Loved it when they realised Brendan was missing and then found he'd practically finished without them. Quote
Scotcaz22 Posted December 3, 2009 Report Posted December 3, 2009 Awesome update! Looking forward to the next one! Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted December 4, 2009 Author Report Posted December 4, 2009 Martha was perhaps a bit full-on but it was understandable and it made Tony ask the Austins to stay. Lucas seems to be a bit more responsible, hopefully that is just a headache Martin's got.Looks like Jack and co are going to interrupt Leah's romantic afternoon... Quote
Scotcaz22 Posted December 4, 2009 Report Posted December 4, 2009 Loved the chapter and glad that Tony came to his senses and got the Austins to stay - yay! Worried for Leah with what's about to come! Quote
blizzard18 Posted December 4, 2009 Report Posted December 4, 2009 Thanks everyone for the comments (as always!) Just wanted to say I have some good news. I am currently in the process of writing an extra eight or so chapters to add to this fic. This was meant to finish at Chapter 60, but I've decided to add some extra bits, including some scenes outside of Summer Bay/Yabbie Creek with some of the characters. I also added a couple more small storylines to go with it that contains more mystery, and more shocks are yet to come. I'll post the next chapter sometime over this weekend. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted December 5, 2009 Author Report Posted December 5, 2009 Oh, I had a feeling there was more to Warren's "apology" to Roman, looks like he's going all Hulk on us.Ray's behind bars which just leaves the question of who was his accomplice.Shame Hugo and Lucas still can't sort it out. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted December 6, 2009 Author Report Posted December 6, 2009 Hmm, wondering if Gina's going to end up in an embarrassing situation and wondering if anything's going to happen between Leah and Hugo... Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted December 7, 2009 Author Report Posted December 7, 2009 Uh-oh, looks like Leah and Hugo...did.Tony and Jack being dragged home like a couple of naughty boys was amusing. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted December 9, 2009 Author Report Posted December 9, 2009 Glad that Lucas and Hugo have made up.Warren seems to be getting more and more sinister...Liked Tony's "I get cake?" Quote
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