callyha Posted February 6, 2010 Report Posted February 6, 2010 Great update! Loved it more soon plz Quote
Scotcaz22 Posted February 8, 2010 Report Posted February 8, 2010 That was a great couple of chapters! Brilliant... To be honest, I didn't like the sound of Warren from the beginning, what with his control over Richard and getting Roman to disappear etc and now him telling Charlie about a mother figure in Billy's life...there's something suspious about Warren...but then I could be wrong and he turns out to be a great guy! Like Aden, I'm worried about Tony hope he will be okay eventually! Again, great couple of chapters! Can't wait for the next update! Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted February 9, 2010 Author Report Posted February 9, 2010 Liked the chat between Charlie and Leah, nice to see her talking things through.A few nice jokes in there, you write a good sense of community. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted February 12, 2010 Author Report Posted February 12, 2010 Well.I'd probably shout at Colleen as well so not going to blame Warren too much for this one.Nice that Luc and Nicole seem to be back on track.Irene's instructions made me smile. Quote
callyha Posted February 13, 2010 Report Posted February 13, 2010 Lol! Belle screamed at the suprise! O no richard! update soon please! Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted February 13, 2010 Author Report Posted February 13, 2010 Brilliant chapter.Lots of funny moments in there, I loved Gina praying that the cake would be all right and the little scene of Ruby and the others bugging Lucas and Nicole, with Annie and Jai explaining about "the moment", had me laughing out loud.Not sure how serious Tony's warning to Jeremy was, might need some anger management there.The ending shocked me, hope Richard's all right. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted February 17, 2010 Author Report Posted February 17, 2010 Looks like Richard being shot has made Charlie realise how much he means to her.Hopefully he'll be all right so they can enjoy it.Good work by Jack putting all the pieces together, hopefully they can get to Billy before Masters... Quote
Scotcaz22 Posted February 22, 2010 Report Posted February 22, 2010 OMG...what a great chapter! I loved the flashback...and am so glad that Patrick was caught before anything else could happen. Looking forward to the next update. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted February 23, 2010 Author Report Posted February 23, 2010 Also glad they caught Patrick, plus Warren showing his vulnerable side as he tries to hide Billy.Hope Richard's okay! Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted March 1, 2010 Author Report Posted March 1, 2010 Rachel and Martha looking after Billy was good.Leah and Hugo were nice on their date...but I really was not expecting Ray to turn up. Quote
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