Red Ranger 1 Posted March 8, 2010 Author Report Posted March 8, 2010 Ha-ha!Belle and her friends playing strip poker.Loved Annie's reaction.Uh-oh, Kent's escaped... Quote
Inactive User Posted March 8, 2010 Report Posted March 8, 2010 Great chapter. Uh oh! Kent escaped! Hope he won't hurt Tony again Loved the strip poker scenes More soon please Quote
callyha Posted March 8, 2010 Report Posted March 8, 2010 strip poker! and irene walking in! Charlie and watson better get Kent! More soon please Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted March 13, 2010 Author Report Posted March 13, 2010 Uh-oh.Hopefully Charlie's decision to keep Kent's return a secret won't backfire...Some nice humour with Irene giving the kids chores.Looks like that's goodbye to Ray then, glad Leah seems to have got the closure she wanted. Quote
Scotcaz22 Posted March 17, 2010 Report Posted March 17, 2010 Ohhh! I liked the photography with Brendan and Belle - really nice! I think Aden had the right idea about Tony and that Xaiver should have listened to him. I don't like the sound of what's going to happen in the next chapter...here's hoping that it will be Kent who won't make it out alive. :S Looking forward to the next update. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted March 17, 2010 Author Report Posted March 17, 2010 Oh, Richard's getting a bit frustrated.Liked the stuff with Belle and Brendan.Alf's reaction to everyone making the same comment was amusing.Nice cliffhanger at the end. Quote
callyha Posted March 22, 2010 Report Posted March 22, 2010 Wow! Great chapter! Well written! Can't wait for next bit Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted March 23, 2010 Author Report Posted March 23, 2010 Woah.Lots of action, you built up the tension well, there were lots of moments when I thought that someone people actually cared about had been killed.Really hope Andrew's going to be all right. Quote
charmed60 Posted March 29, 2010 Report Posted March 29, 2010 Loved love this chapter! Poor Tony, you wrote his shock so well and it sounds like things are just going to get worse for him He's not had a good time in your fic at all has he Looking forward to the action coming up to! Charlie's reaction to realizing Richard was going to propose was amusing! Quote
Scotcaz22 Posted March 29, 2010 Report Posted March 29, 2010 Another great update! Poor Tony and his family - they are going through a hard time. Hopefully things will be better... Update soon! Quote
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