Lady Frankerley's Lover (by Miranda, Red Ranger and jdoddy) - comments

[HighwayUnicorn]

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[Miranda]

Oh bravo Mr Ranger Sir!

I have been feeling a little out of sorts, reclining on my chaise longue, so that chapter lifted my spirits as much as a tot of brandy. But being a lady, I would never think to indulge in brandy of course!

[Red Ranger 1]

Oh my.That did make me smile and the use of word play was inspired.Moved the plot along quite a bit as well.Aphrodisiac gas...Wonder where I can buy some.

[HighwayUnicorn]

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[Miranda]

Gosh you two are quick off the mark

I must admit, I even made myself laugh with that episode. I did write it late at night when very tired, that's when I get good ideas for stories

[Miranda]

Oh yes, Fab. U. Lous! I chortled so much I just pressed the help key on the key board by accident.

Very well done, old bean! Worth waiting for. I thought you'd had an attack of the vapours due to the long interval, you know how to keep your fans in suspenders.

[HighwayUnicorn]

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[Miranda]

I liked the bits about Indigo/Violet and Romeo kissing her hand. And Trey thinking Sid was sending Romeo romantic notes

[Red Ranger 1]

Wow!Lot of action and counter plotting in that chapter, having a hard time keeping abreast with it all. Going to have to put my thinking cap on again...

[Miranda]

MWAH ha ha ha ha! I thought it was about time to move into plotting and not Lerve. The next episode I write will be romantic, (after you've done yours of course).