Lady Frankerley's Lover (by Miranda, Red Ranger and jdoddy) - comments

[Red Ranger 1]

Yeah, I don't know if you were intending to drag it out for longer but it felt like we were reaching the point where all that had to happen.I think we can probably get a few more chapters out of it though.

[Red Ranger 1]

Ha-hah!Just stopped off from wandering by the Atlantic Ocean(European side)to read this chapter on a computer that´s about ten years older than the one at home but no slower.Penn being crushed to death...why do I get the feeling you enjoyed that? And the aphrodisiac gas out in force again.And Gina not getting many lines...I shall have to think about the next chapter for when I get back.

[HighwayUnicorn]

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Edited September 19, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn

[Miranda]

Aha, Red, you couldn't resist tuning in to see the latest installment! Yes, I did enjoy Penn's death, he is a psychopath.

Thanks again to Carina, you deserve a medal for putting up with me and Red's overactive imagination!

[Miranda]

Oh, many congratulations to you, dear Sir Ranger. Is that the conclusion of this raunchy, yet political tale?

[HighwayUnicorn]

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Edited September 19, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn

[Red Ranger 1]

Oh, many congratulations to you, dear Sir Ranger. Is that the conclusion of this raunchy, yet political tale?

Well, I wasn't intending it to be so feel free to add whatever you like!

[Red Ranger 1]

Ah, nice ending.I've enjoyed writing this story with you, thanks for the collaboration.

[HighwayUnicorn]

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Edited October 5, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn

[Miranda]

Thanks Red and Carina. I've loved writing this too, but its time to draw it to a close and do other writings.

Carina, you deserve the rosette for No. 1 Fan! Thanks for your support, its so much better when people comment, then I know people are actually reading and enjoying.