HighwayUnicorn Posted June 23, 2010 Report Posted June 23, 2010 (edited) Deleted. Edited September 14, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote
Danni02 Posted June 23, 2010 Report Posted June 23, 2010 lol I did the same....need to pay more attention to the names Quote
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charmed60 Posted June 23, 2010 Report Posted June 23, 2010 Honestly don't worry I don't mind at all, it made me giggle Quote
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KirstyEkua Posted June 24, 2010 Report Posted June 24, 2010 Another fantastic chapter I really liked the conversation between Elijah and the Bishop. I'm glad he made Eliajh realise that what happened to Rachel wasn't his fault and i guess deep down he didn't really want to leave the Church. It's a shame he felt so guilty that it drove him to reconsider his whole belief system but i like you gave him his own little story and it worked really well. It must be awful to be in that position and i'm sure it happens every day to people like Elijah. What made it even better was that you clearly know what you are taking about and it was really clear what the Bishop was saying. I am warming to Mr Wallis He was pretty understanding of Rachel and it was very good of him to give her a second chance despite her little breakdown (i guess you could call it that?). I think she is trying so sad to keep everything together and tell herself this is something she has to do when in reality i don't think she is ready Her emotions seem to be all over the place. I like how you have her trying to be all strong but you can tell she is just falling apart inside. Can't wait for more. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted June 25, 2010 Report Posted June 25, 2010 Woah.So, was that Tony or is Rachel just delusional?Can't wait to find out!Hoping that Angelo's secret is going to be innocent, Charlie's pretty upset with him as it is. Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted June 25, 2010 Report Posted June 25, 2010 (edited) Deleted. Edited September 14, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote
Danni02 Posted June 25, 2010 Report Posted June 25, 2010 I'm hoping that Angelo's serect is something good rather than he's doing something he shouldnt be.... Oh my, so is it really Tony or not....cant wait to find out! Quote
suzannelgnz Posted June 25, 2010 Report Posted June 25, 2010 Whoa.... this fic has definitely taken a real change in direction I'm looking forward to finding out if it is Tony, and what will happen next. Quote
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