Please Be Mine (by Jen) - comments

[Anaya]

*flailing and squeeing all over the place again*

So I poke my head in to this fic and find that you've just posted one of my most favourite chapters. The one with passion-filled-Geoffrey-getting-all-hot-and-heavy-as-a-result-of-some-divine-intervention. So I just had to read it all over again.

Just amazing. Until Belle ruined it ofcourse.

No, but seriously I love this entire update. The awkwardness, the unsaid, the trying to make sense of this 'thing' that they have and the cute little texts <33.

Oh & even if there were 50 other cards between them they'd still find their way to each other. But I'll go with whatever logic Geoff needs to make sense of it all.

Really well written. Still never get bored even though I've read it so many times.

[Red Ranger 1]

Geoff basically jumping Aden did make me smile.Of course they've gone back to denial now. Even if they are still text flirting.

[HighwayUnicorn]

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[Red Ranger 1]

Okay.They are so in love.Those text messages are beyond flirty and into intimate.Loved the talks between Geoff and Annie, you're writing a really believable sibling relationship between them.

[Red Ranger 1]

Things definitely seem to be progressing between them, they're a lot more relaxed but there's still a nice sense of awkwardness between them, as though they're not quite sure what this is yet.Had to smile at Geoff's reaction to Aden suggesting he play nurse, so Geoff.

[HighwayUnicorn]

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[Red Ranger 1]

Loved Geoff's thoughts throughout, they were really well-written.More flirty texts from Aden!

[HighwayUnicorn]

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[HighwayUnicorn]

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[Red Ranger 1]

Geoff as Aden's cheerleader is an amusing image.But oh gosh, that ending.I thought people might not be happy when they found out but I wasn't expecting them to do that to Geoff.