I'll Be With You Until The End (by callyha) - comments

[Inactive User]

Great chapter

The preview sounds exciting!

More soon please xx

[HighwayUnicorn]

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[charmed60]

Fantastic callyha, VJ was really sweet with Charlie. Nice to see an improvement between Charlie and Ruby, you wrote her pain really well. Look forward to an update

[Inactive User]

Liked the last two chapters More soon please x

[Danni02]

Awesome stuff Cally!

Part 1

I liked that Ruby explained to Charlie that she needed time to figure things out and what she wants to ask other than just walking off and not talking to her, that was nice. Loved the VJ/Charlie interaction and poor Leah for getting herself upset that she wasnt there to visit earlier, but at least she is there now and Charlie didnt make her feel bad about it. I'm glad Charlie spoke to her about the Roman situation. Angelo's moment of realising he was in love with Charlie was kinda sweet. Bless him. I have a feeling he might get his wishes! I am glad Ruby has found someone to talk to about this and I think that Bree gave her some good advice.

Part 2

I am glad that Charlie and Roman finally had a chance to talk and I think that Charlie did the right thing in breaking up with him. I think they left it to late to be able to get things back to what it was when things were good between them. I'm still not finding myself feeling that sorry for Roman though. I think he has handled the whole situation badly and all my sympathy lies with Charlie. I loved what Angelo had to say to Roman! He sure put him in his place - Go Angelo!

Update soon!

[lino]

Great updates. you are so amazing for updating this story so quickly. I love Charlies and Leah friendship. And also Vj with charlie is so sweet. Thanks again.

[carywary]

Wow you've been writing loads Cally! Great work

Part 1 - Poor Charlie in so much pain, but it was a lovely moment when Ruby came and hugged her. I hope Ruby doesn't stay away for too long, but at least she explained to Charlie that she needed space to sort things out in her head. Now it's Charlie wanting to see Angelo even when she's in pain but I think it will take more than a juice to take her mind off him! And Angelo realised he loved her , at last! I'm glad Leah came to see her, and that she was able to talk to her about Roman, cos she probably needed to talk to someone about it. It's good that Ruby can talk to Bree, and hopefully now she will try and talk to Charlie about how she feels.

Part 2 - I'm glad Charlie was honest with Roman, and hopefully now he will accept that it's over. You scared me when Roman went after Angelo, I thought he was going to do something to him! But they certainly got some things out in the open and Angelo said what he needed to! That was a lovely wee moment between Ross and Morag. I sort of wish that Leah had went back to Charlie instead of going with Roman, it's Charlie that needs her support! Great work!!

[HighwayUnicorn]

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[prancer]

those last chapters were great

im glade that they have broken up and that means charlie and angelo can get together

i cannt wait for more

KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!

[HighwayUnicorn]

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