I'll Be With You Until The End (by callyha) - comments

[prancer]

from the notes you could see that charlie was really happy, it was sweet

i hope that charlie and ruby can over come this and have a good relationship

cant wait for more

Post soon!!!

[HighwayUnicorn]

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Edited September 14, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn

[Danni02]

Once again, another great update!

Roman is so angry right now, its making me angry! Grr. He cant keep treating people the way he is or he is going to have no one left. I dont know if we are supposed to feel any sympthy for him or not, but right now, I dont feel sorry for him at all. I loved Angelo and Charlie's chat and that he want's to help Ruby, but I agree things should come from Charlie and Ruby should hear about it first. Its nice that Charlie feels comfortable enough with Angelo to want to tell about what happened. She called Ruby her daughter already, aww . Still really intrigued about the whole birth cirtificate thing! Ending sounding interesting too with Morag...hmm.

Cant wait for more of this Cally! Please update soon

Edited July 26, 2010 by Danni02

[mellbell86]

Great update, Cally! I love the stuff with Charlie and Ruby but I hope they work it out soon and Ruby gets some answers, whatever they might be. I love that Charlie called Ruby her daughter without a second thought or stumble, she really wants to be there for her, you can tell. I love the way your writing it all and adding Angelo in. I hope they have a future together, they would make a great couple. This whole birth certificate thing has still got me baffled, wonder where your going with that. I've been thinking and thinking but still draw blanks. Wonder if these past thoughts (jorunals) are going to help Charlie, maybe Morag has a way.

Can't wait for another update! xx

[Inactive User]

Great chapter

Hope Charlie and Ruby will be able to work things out soon

Loved how Angelo was beginning there for Charlie

More soon please

[Danni02]

Ooh, brilliant update Cally.

I loved all the different thoughts. Poor Leah, seems like she is kinda blaming herself for this because Roman rejected her help so she wasnt able to stop him. Poor Ruby. I cant begin to imagine how she is feeling right now but its good she seems to be working through things and having more of an understanding. I just hope she will speak to Charlie again soon. Yes Roman, well done, you are pathetic and dont deserve anyone's help. Its your fault, you ruined everything, and are going to keep ruining things if you dont wise up and start treating people who love you and trying to help you with a bit of respect. VJ's thoughts were so sweet. Ross' thoughts were so sad. He needs a nice big hug. There isn't really much of a point in him doubting his actions in the past as he will never be able to change them, but he does have a chance to fix it now, so he should work towards that. And then Angelo. He just so desperately wants to help Charlie and Ruby, its so sweet. It must be hard from him to see the woman he loves so broken and upset and I can understand why he wants to do anything he can to help. I think if is just there for Charlie to listen when she wants him too he will be doing more than enough.

Charlie re-reading her journals was lovely. You really wrote some nice stuff there. It's so heartbreaking that Charlie so desperately wanted to be a mother to Ruby but she was denied that chance. It must have been so hard for her to hear her daughter call someone else mum and dad, especially mum. I loved that Morag was there with her and she was being sympathetic, yet she still seemed so controlled, very Morag. I think its a good idea that Ruby read's what Charlie was thinking about her when she was younger as Ruby probably feels Charlie gave her up as she didnt love or want her but this will let her see that Charlie has always loved her and that she did want to be a mother to her. I think it is best these are given to her by Charlie and it would be lovely for them to look through them together and to talk over things more. Interested in seeing what else Charlie wanted to write in it. So Charlie found the birth cirtificate. I hope she does pass this on to Ruby. Interesting to see why Ruby wanted it so much and how she will react if she gets to see it.

Okay so I will stop there, you'll probably get bored of reading all that....

Edited July 27, 2010 by Danni02

[lino]

Amazing update. I loved reading all the peoples thoughts and wishes. Even VJ was included. I also like how Morag is such a help in this difficult time.

I loved this chapter, thank you.

[HighwayUnicorn]

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Edited September 14, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn

[Chester-Sam]

Woah didn't see that coming, but I'm glad she found the birth certificate, maybe Ruby will feel better after seeing it and after reading the journals. Bless Morag for doing that! She can be so sweet sometimes

The thoughts and feeling were brilliant and very well written, it's a good way to keep what they're feeling fresh in our memories.

Another amazing chapter Cally, can't wait for more

- Sam!

Edited July 27, 2010 by Chester-Sam

[mellbell86]

Wow, what a great update. I really love the way you processed everyone's individual thoughts in particularly Ruby. It's interesting to see what's running through the young girl's head. Feeling so lonely, confused yet wondering about her relationship with Charlie. I hope she finds answers to some of the things she is looking for soon but that it will bring her closer to Charlie. Also, the journal entries from Charlie. She wanted to be a mum to Ruby, it must have been so hard for her to give her up. Aw, the preschool part where they **** the door in her face, heartbreaking. I hope she gets to hear the word she's been longing to hear one day, 'Mum'. I hope Ruby gets a chance to talk with Charlie soon and also read some of these entries to see how much she was loved and wanted only if the circumstances were different.

Charlie still has thoughts to write in the journal? Wonder what she is going to write down? Plus the missing birth certificate with Charlie listed as her mum <3 Glad that exists and not just the one Ruby has.

Thanks for the updates. Hope you update soon, I'm loving this!