I'll Be With You Until The End (by callyha) - comments

[Inactive User]

Wow great chapter. Loved how you wrote everyone's thoughts really well. Update soon

[charlie29]

lovely chapters, really loving this story. Poor Ruby must feel so lost, but nice for Morag to try and help. Charlie is struggling to cope with everything understandably, and Angelo is being very sweet. More soon please!

[Scotcaz22]

Wow - these last few (well, lots) of chapeters were really great!

I felt so sorry for Roman all through - yes I know he was a b******* but he is suffering too. But one thing that I'm annoyed about is that Roman has forgotten about how he's acted would have affected Nicole and other people, Leah & Miles etc. I just hope that he will realise soon and do something about it! *hugs him tightly*

I loved all the developments between Charlie, Ruby, Morag and Ross. Ruby is feeling lost at the moment and is unsure which way to go; should she talk to Ross? Charlie? Let Angelo comfort her and take care of her?

Charlie - wow - she's really suffering and confused. Wanting to tell Ruby everything but finding it difficult, and Angelo being there will be helpful but painful at the same time because of her growing feelings for him.

I loved the idea of the journals - I think they would help Ruby understand better.

Update soon!

[lollypop]

I am loving this fan fic so much. You have no idea just how much.

You are doing such a fantastic job with it and the storyline is really attention grabbing.

I love the fact that each character is given their own little moment in each chapter and that everything they feel or think is described so well.

I love that each character seems to have their own journey that they have to take and that while certain aspects are wrapped up in other cahracters, you give them that space to develope individually.

I really like the continuity of it all. You pay very close attention to detail and it shows in each new chapter. You never faulter in carrying elements of the story from one chapter to the next and it really pays dividends to you in the end because as a reader it makes you go "ah I remember that" and you feel like you are actually being carried along with the story.

The Charlie/Ruby dynamic. I love it. You show the heart of the two characters really well and their struggle to move forward even though the past seems to be blocking them from doing so. I like that you are showing the genuine hardship of it all and that you show this in Charlie and Ruby's realisation that it is going to be hard for them to go back to the way things were before. But underneath it all you can see that all they really want to do is love each other and be there for one another.

The whole concept of bringing Charlie's journals into the mix was a brilliant idea because it adds a real personal touch to the story. It's always good when we get to see glimpses into a characters past and by adding in the journals you've made it all that more intimate because these journals are Charlie's personal thoughts and her true feelings towards Ruby.

I can't wait to read what Charlie has to add to them. I'm sure whatever it is, it will be truly heartfelt and endearing.

Keep up the good work. I'm patiently waiting for the next update.

Lauren x x x x

[mellbell86]

I love the way you write Morag. It's so lovely to have her there supporting Charlie when she needs someone. It was so warm and loving and you can see she just wants the best for her family, trying to put them all back together again.

Oh Miles and listening to Marilyn's theories. Hilarious. I love Marilyns 'If you look up at the stars whilst walking, it cleanses your body of the negative feelings and replaces them with positive feelings'. Will have to try that one. She's so witty and I love how she pops up with these things. Poor Nicole. It seems like Roman is just pushing everyone away and causing them so much more pain then any of them deserve. I hope he starts tackling those problems one by one and realise he does have support from people around him.

I'm interested to see the whole story play out around this birth certificate but it was a sweet touch that Charlie now has it and even kept it in the pillow case under her head. I think some answers will come soon, now that Ruby has asked to read the journals. I hope she will find some things she is looking for. I'm looking forward to reading more from the journals and what happened all those years ago, you keep it so fresh and interesting!

Can't wait for more xx

[HighwayUnicorn]

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Edited September 14, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn

[Danni02]

Loved that update!

I loved the opening scene with Morag and Charlie. Morag just really wants to help Charlie, so sweet. I am glad Roman is realising he has done wrong and I hope he can make it up to Nicole. Nice too see he can awknowledge that it was his fault his relationship with Charlie ended. I can kinda understand why he would want to put some blame on Angelo, but I dont really think he has anything to do with the break up, Roman is just being paranoid. Or maybe if Roman felt Charlie was getting closer to Angelo during their relationship then he should have started to pay her more attention! I like that Miles went to comfort Nicole and what Marilyn said to him about the stars was good! So Marilyn!

I liked reading what everyone felt when they woke up Glad Leah is feeling better with herself and I think its nice she wants to help Nicole. I liked you adding a little bit about VJ too! haha, VJ is cool!

Angelo! Glad he is off to be with Charlie.

So Ruby is reading the journals! Looking forward to reading more bits from them and seeing Ruby's reactions to them. And wondering what else Charlie wrote in there.....

Aslo, looking forward how the whole birth cirtificate thing goes down!

Update soon

[Chester-Sam]

Oh I can't wait to read Ruby's reaction to Charlie's diary entries from way back when!

The birth certificate in the pillow case is cute, I wonder if she'll show it to Ruby?

Morag was a sweet heart once again, and even shed a tear!

I love the random things that Marilyn comes out with, she's such a jolly person

Love this fic, I look forward to the next chapter

- Sam!

[lino]

Your are so amazing in updating so fast and brilliantly i might add.

I love the relatinship Morag is forming with Ruby and Charlie, especially it is not something which comes naturally to her.

I love the fact that Roman did know about Leah staying behind. But he is right, one problem at the time and Nicole does come first.

I would like to read some scenes maybe between Leah and Nicole. I always wanted to explore this relationship on the show, but we never got so far because the writers had to axe Roman. One of the most stupid decission done on the show.

Anyway back to this fanfic: Loving also how you so often include Vj.

Thanks again for updating .... till next time!!!!

[charlie29]

Fantastic Chapter!! Love the way Morag was comforting Charlie at the beginning, nice to see that side of her. Can't wait to see some of Charlie's journals, I'm sure it will answer a lot of questions for Ruby. Thanks for updating so quickly. Looking forward to the next part and seeing how Charlie's next rehab goes - I like the way that her recovery is taking a long time, in most fics they make miraculous recoveries, so its nice to see it being realistic. Great work