I'll Be With You Until The End (by callyha) - comments

[Inactive User]

Great chapter

Loved the ending. Hope the journals will give Ruby the answers she needed.

Loved how Morag is comforting her step daughter

Looking forwards to read next chapter of this fanfiction

[Scotcaz22]

That was a great chapter, always nice to read from each person's POV and how they're feeling etc.

Ohh, Ruby finally gets the journals - can't wait to see how she handles with reading them, I'm sure it's going to be hard for her, but hopefully she and Charlie can work it through.

I just love Miles in your fic - he's being supportive with Nicole.

Poor Roman - at least he's starting to face things but I don't like the sound of him being unsure about Angelo...I just hope there's not any trouble brewing between them? Charlie doesn't really need that, on top of other stuff!

Cant wait to see what you've got in store!

[Chester-Sam]

Another fantastic chapter, I'm so on edge, I need to know Ruby's reaction! I'm dying here lol!

Oh and she knows that Charlie has the birth certificate, that could be interesting

Literally can't wait for the next update,

- Sam!

[mellbell86]

VJ is so cute wanting a bacon burger after coco pops. Colleen offering him a chocolate milkshake. His getting spoilt! Poor Nicole, she's so upset but it's good that Leah is wanting to help her through, talking with her. I hope Roman's next few steps start creating a path to letting the ones who love him back in and not pushing them away or more drinking like he has been but it looks like his working on it especially with the big battlefield going on inside his head!

Charlie's thoughts in her journal are so moving and real. You've done such a great job writing them. They really add to the story and make it all come together. I love how we can have that little bit of insight into how Charlie dealt with her painful situation all those years ago and somehow it might help Ruby and her re-connect on some kind of level. The last entry I loved and having some kind of knowledge about the birth certificate makes sense. I hope Ruby gets to see it soon too. Poor Charlie wanting to be a mother all these years, watching Ruby call her grandmother 'mum' and missing out on so much. You've really captured it all. Although, have to say I really don't like the ending, leaving us like that haha

Thank you for the update. I love looking forward to reading them almost daily so thank you. You have such a great way of writing and capturing a story of everyone's points of view. That alone speaks wonders xx

[HighwayUnicorn]

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Edited September 14, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn

[charlie29]

Brilliant chapter. The journal entries were written so well, you could really feel how Charlie must have felt at the time. Am looking forward to seeing Ruby's reaction and hope that now she has seen Charlie's perspective she can understand a little more. Really great update, looking forward to the next bit

[Danni02]

lol at VJ wanting more food after his breakfast! Poor Nicole. I liked that Leah went to talk to her and that Nicole semed to welcome the comfort from her. Hopefully Roman is going to start to make amends now. But I'm beginning to get a bit fearful that he is going to do something to Angelo.

I loved Charlie's thoughts! So brilliantly written. I loved that she called the baby 'button'. So sweet. I love the addition of Charlie's thoughts throughout all of this. It nice to read how Charlie felt about everything and how she dealt with things. Mothers day must have been so hard for her! Hopefully this will help Ruby be able to work through this and fix things with Charlie. So we know a bit more about the birth cirtificate then, I wonder if Ruby will ask Charlie for it.

How can you leave us with an ending like that! I cant wait to see what Ruby has to say about this!

Brillaint update Cally! Update soon

[lino]

Thank you so much for including scenes with Leah and Nicole. I loved it!!!!!!!!

Don't get me wrong i am addicted to your story and i like changelo a lot, but Leah is my favourite on this show so i tend to enjoy Leah stories just a tiny bit more.

But the way you wrote Ruby reading the entries was superbly written.

Thanks again for updating so fast. I can't wait for the next chapter and see what will happen especially to Leah and Roman.

[Inactive User]

Wow great chapter!! So touching and emoticonal

Loved how you wrote Ruby's emoticons when she was reading the diary entries. Hopefully it will help her and Charlie work things through.

I feel sorry for Charlie. It must be really tough for her to let her daughter go and be raised by her parents like she did on the show.

I blame Ross for it and still disliked him on the show since the secret was revealed. My opnion why I disliked him because it must had something to do with him not putting Grant in jail and taking Ruby away from her real mum, robbing Charlie of her chance to be a mother years ago.

More soon please

Edited July 29, 2010 by ~JarlieFanEver~

[freckleface]

I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in AGES, I've been away on holiday :/

I've read all the chapters I missed (and there's A LOT, you update amazingly fast) and they're fantastic!

You get everyones thoughts and emotions perfectly and I love the way you intigrate thoughts into the story.

Charlie's journal is an excellent idea as well, it gives you a really clear view of what she was feeling back then yet it also helps the story to progress

I'm glad Angelo's realised he loves her >< and I love how he's always there to support her at rehab. And Ruby seems to be accepting what has happened, or at least finding out why which is a step in the right direction.

I like VJs little moments in each chapter because they add moments of humour into the situation

Brilliant updates and I'm waiting for more

Georgie xx