I'll Be With You Until The End (by callyha) - comments

[Inactive User]

Great update. You wrote it really well Well done, mate. Update soon. We all love you and your lovely fanfictions, lol. xx

[Chester-Sam]

Now I need to know what Ruby is thinking, it's killing me!

Angelo was cute with the donuts

I hope they get stuff sorted in their chat and that Charlie is ok, blacking out cant be good!

Awesome as always,

- Sam!

Edited July 30, 2010 by Chester-Sam

[HighwayUnicorn]

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Edited September 14, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn

[mellbell86]

I'm just loving VJ, the more his around. That kid is so cute. Wonder what the book was? I hope Charlie and Ruby get to talk soon, all these interruptions and stalling aren't good but hopefully soon. Angelo and the donuts. He really is a charmer. I think Charlie was a little surprised to see him there but it's so nice his supporting her and being their every step of the way. It's those little things that count. Love the thoughts of both girls. You always put it together so it flows. You can really feel what they are feeling and see it too. Oh no, Charlie fainted? I hope she's ok. She needs to concentrate on getting better, not pleasing people, gaining trust or respect, just getting better and then going from there.

Another great update. Can't wait for more x

[Danni02]

Great update Cally!

I loved the little Leah and Nicole scene! Hopefully they can get through to Roman soon. VJ! He sweet! Has he made a drawing for his Aunty Charlie? Awww....I liked the Ross and Morag chat and Morag is right, Ross just needs to stop thinking about the past and more to what he can go now. Argh silly nurses interupting when they did!! I really want to get this Ruby and Charlie chat! Haha Angelo bringing doughnuts for Charlie. But then the ending! What wrong with Charlie!

Update soon

[Rach Loves H&A]

Great Update!!!

Hope Charlie is ok

Update Soon!!!

[ashleyjane]

That was great and so so sweet I loved how

irene took vj to school..

how angelo got her donuts...

I loved how charlie and ruby just want to talk together

i loved everything

great update update soon

[Danni02]

Great update Cally!

I loved the opening paragraph. It was really well written and descriptive to what was going on and how Ruby felt. I loved Angelo comforting her again. Oh Roman I just dont know...I am glad he is going to try to talk to Nicole and Leah and hopefully he can fix things with them. I like the last scene between Charlie and Ruby. Poor Ruby thinking it was her fault Charlie collapsed because she was pressuring her. Nice that when Charlie told her it wasnt she accepted that. So Ruby finally gets to see her real birth cirtificate! Looking forward to seeing what happens next there!

Update soon

Edited July 31, 2010 by Danni02

[Chester-Sam]

Wow this chapter was amazing!

The slow motion part was written perfectly, I literally saw the events happening in slow motion

This was super emotional and im left wondering how Ruby is going to feel now that she has her real birth certificate..

Fantastic as always Cally,

- Sam!

[charmed60]

Beautiful update, can't wait to see more on Ruby's reaction!

Update soon please