I'll Be With You Until The End (by callyha) - comments

[freckleface]

Go on Nicole! I'm glad she's trying to make him see sense so Roman can make amends. Looking forward to the next chapter (:

update soon please!

[carywary]

Wow you've written loads!!

Chapter 28 - Roman got fired!! And him storming out of the diner isn't going to help him get his job back when he calms down. I'm glad Ross opened up to Morag, she needs to know everything that went on and she can be there to support him. I thought it was lovely the way Morag and Ross both cried, it shows how much she cares for all of them that it has affected her so much. And Angelo is so good with Ruby, he's an outsider of the family so that she feels she can talk to him, but he's not a stranger, it's good that he's there for her, I'm sure Charlie would really appreciate it. Trust Leah to spend her time worrying about Roman...I hope he's ok but I hope he's nowhere near Charlie in the hospital. Ruby went to see Charlie...yayy!!

Chapter 29 - Poor Nicole, so worried about Roman, but he should have thought of her when he went out and got drunk every night. Miles/Mr Copeland, that made me laugh! I love how Charlie was honest with Ruby about the birth certificate, but if she can't find it it's not her fault, Ruby should have stayed and listened to Charlie instead of storming out. Those diary entries were so beautiful and emotional. I love the way the baby kicking was so special, and why she called it Ruby, and you could see how much she loved her. Beautiful.

Chapter 30 - I love how Miles is so comforting to Nicole, he's like a father figure. Roman was really mean to her, of course she can help him, he pushes her away he has no-one...well maybe Leah but that's it. Aw Angelo brought Charlie flowers. I loved their wee chat, and Ruby should definetely hear the truth from Charlie. I loved the way Ruby let Ross comfort her, I'm glad she's not rejecting him. And a wee chat between Morag and Charlie might do both of them the world of good.

Chapter 31 - I love the way you wrote in thoughts from everyone's perspective, I love the way you included a wee one from VJ. And you finished it with Angelo saying he loved her, simply perfect I loved the diary entries, they are so powerful and filled with emotion, it must have been so painful for Charlie to re-read them, she wanted to be a mother to Ruby so badly I can't believe the birth certificate fell out!!

Chapter 32 - Oh flip I completely forgot Morag was still there!! Aw Morag comforted Charlie, that was lovely! I'm glad that Roman wants to make things right with Nicole, he owes her an apology. I think Miles arrived at a really good time for Nicole. I loved the way you wrote about what everyone woke up to, I am loving the variety! I'm so glad Ruby is getting to read the diaries, maybe she will see things from Charlie's perspective, the hurt and the pain she felt when Ruby was brought up as her sister.

Chapter 32 - I'm glad that Nicole could talk to Leah, although I don't like Roman she deserves a good relationship with her dad. I hope Roman doesn't decide to make Angelo pay, nothing is Angelo's fault, he's been there for Charlie all along! Aw at Ruby reading those diary entries, I thought the last one was particularly moving. And just as I was looking forward to seeing what Ruby was going to do when she came closer to Charlie, Tish walks in

Chapter 33 - I thought the wee scene with Leah and Nicole was lovely, and so was the one with Irene and VJ, and she walked him right in, how nice. Aw, Angelo getting Charlie some doughnuts. And what Ross said to Morag was really lovely. Charlie and Ruby both seemed really pleased to see Angelo there, and I loved the way he teased them saying she was only getting the doughnuts afterwards! I really hope Charlie's ok

Chapter 34 - I love how Angelo's natural instinct is to protect Ruby. Angelo was so worried about Charlie, and yet he managed to be a comfort to Ruby, and he phoned Ross and Morag to tell them. I loved this chapter so much, you wrote it so well! I'm glad Leah is going to have a chat with Roman cos his behaviour is unacceptable! The bit in the diner about keeping an eye on Colleen made me laugh The scene with Charlie and Ruby was beautiful, and the way you finished the chapter was so moving.

Chapter 35 - I hope that Roman decides to put things right, even if it's only for Nicole's sake, cos he really needs to work on his relationship with her. And he will listen to her when she tells him to apologise to people. I'm glad he told her the truth about everything, she deserved to know.

Phew, sorry they're not that long, I didn't want you to fall asleep reading them! But they were great, can't wait for the next chapter.

[Scotcaz22]

Some great chapters!

Loved the chapter where Charlie gave the certificate to Ruby...that was emotional and put a choke in my throat.

I loved the interactions between Roman and Nicole - Roman needed these harsh words from Nicole and hopefully now that he has started, he can finish it with the others and that Charlie will listen and forgive him.

Brilliant, as usual and can't wait for your next update!

[Danni02]

Another fantastic update Cally!

I liked the opening paragraph with Angelo feelings. It kinda breaks my heart that he has liked her for so long and not been able to anything about it. But I really admire him for not acting on his feelings for her because she was with someone else. He still could have easily tried it on with her as he liked her so much but because she wasnt available he did the right thing by not getting in the way of a relationship. I guess this was a shock for Angelo too, and its sweet his is able to accept it and be there for Charlie without judging her for lying to Ruby about this for all this time and just being there to suport both Charlie and Ruby. I love how much he has been there for Ruby. Its so sweet of him to care, like you said he is an outside and he doesnt really have any involvement with Ruby so he doesnt have to do it.

Poor Ross. I'm glad he has Morag there for him. She is being a great support.

I liked the little Angelo/Ross part. With Ross bringing him into a hug. And I like that Angelo calls him sir. (seems to be a pattern there with your fics ) Its respectable. Although I find it a little bit funny. I liked how Ross thanked him for all he was doing

"And as for Charlie, there's nothing I wouldn't do for her"

Angelo is so lovely. And yes, he would do anything for Charlie.

Update soon! Cant wait for more.

Edited August 2, 2010 by Danni02

[Chester-Sam]

Poor Ross :/ you can see just how much he regrets the decision all those years back, at least Morag is good enough to understand, help out and not judge.. she is a legend after all

Angelo is so sweet, he's so respectful towards Ross and really seems to care about Charlie and Ruby, I can't wait to find out what's happening with Mother & Daughter behind closed doors, hopefully they will take the big first step towards bridging the gap!

Amazing chapter, I love these character seperation chapters and even the thoughts and feelings chapter a few back, its bringing a whole new perspective and I feel like I'm in the story because of it I love how you write this and it is hands down one of my favourites,

I look forward to your next update Cally,

- Sam!

[Scotcaz22]

Brilliant chapter!

Liked how Ross explained what happened to the journals & the boxes etc and you could see it in the words that he did really regret what he did years ago but hopefully he will be able to move forward with the help and support from Morag and Angelo.

I loved Morag in this fic - she's showing her soft side a lot and its a lovely thing to see - you rarely see it on the screen (although we did see it when she dealt with Rpss's dementia(?) or was it Achiezeilmer's(?) - ughh...bad spelling!) so yeah, like I said, its nice to see Morag being very supportive with Ross and with Ruby & Charlie.

Can't wait for the next update!

[HighwayUnicorn]

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Edited September 17, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn

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Great chapter. You wrote it well and perfectly! Well done Update soon xx

[ashleyjane]

hope angelo tells charlie his feelings for her and I think ross is starting to realise angelo has feelings for charlie.

[carywary]

Another great chapter, I liked how you told the story of how Angelo first met Charlie and how his feelings developed. I love how he has stood by Charlie through the last few weeks when many would have run away. Morag is really good at calming Ross down, but she has only found out about it all herself, I hope it doesn't get too much for her. I thought it was lovely when Ross hugged Angelo and then he thanked him for being there for "my girls", I thought that was lovely it's the way he would have referred to them before all of this happened and I'm glad nothing has changed in that respect. And borrow away