I'll Be With You Until The End (by callyha) - comments

[lino]

I loved the conversation of Roman and charlie. thanks for the last two updates.

[Inactive User]

Great chapter Really enjoying this Update soon xx

[Chester-Sam]

I love hearing little memories like that, it was sad though

I feel so bad for Charlie, I just hope Ruby can work through her issues and learn to love Charlie as a mother.

Beautifully written as always

- Sam!

[mellbell86]

I haven't been able to reply lately but I've been reading every update and it just keeps getting better and better. I love the latest part. Ruby opening up to Ross and learning little things, also now Morag thinking her own thoughts and such. It's nice to see her written warmer then she normally appears. I look forward to reading more updates soon. Keep up the great writing x

[charlie29]

Lovely updates. Roman should not have hit angelo but it's good that he and Charlue have sorted their problems. The Ross and Ruby chats were lovely and it's nice to see morag being so supportive. So well written, well done!! Can't wait for more

[Scotcaz22]

My favourite part has to be the Ross and Ruby's conversation, but the rest of it were great too!

Can't wait for the next update!

[carywary]

Really enjoyed that poor Angelo, stupid Roman shouldn't have gotten away with it so easily! It's nice to see Ruby still calling Ross Dad, I loved their wee conversation and Ruby knows how much he cares about her so it's good that she's telling him what she's thinking. I hope Morag can talk to Charlie in a way that will help both of them deal with their past and the choices that they had to make as Morag is still suffering in silence. I hope that Ruby gets things sorted out so that she can talk more with Charlie. Great writing as usual!

[Danni02]

Good update Cally!

I liked the Nicole and Ruby stuff. Must have been hard for Ruby when Nicole kept referring to Charlie as her sister but I liked that she was trying to help her. Ooh Ruby getting into trouble with the neighbours and police.... what did she do?....It must be hard for Ross wanting to be there for both girls at the same time, which of course would be impossible, and I think he needed Morag just to tell him what to do. Not sure if Morag should have went after Ruby though, she did say she wanted to be alone.....but will just have just to wait and see what happens there. Glad Roman is continuing to right his wrongs and is going to talk to Leah. Hopefully that will go well.

Update soon, cant wait for more!

P.S. Also gutted about Esther and Brendon's exit from DWTS. She was soo good.

[Chester-Sam]

In trouble with neighbours and police? What did she do?

Ruby really seems to be struggling, I just wish she'd say all this to Charlie

Good stuff,

- Sam!

[Scotcaz22]

That was a lovely short chapter, a sort of a filler until you update with a longer chapter! ;)

I loved the conversation between Ruby and Nicole - poor Ruby having to hold back and not tell Nicole the truth about her and Charlie - hugs Ruby tightly.

It's good that Roman is trying to make amends with people and apologise for his behaviour and hopefully Leah will find it in her to forgive him.

Can't wait for your next update!