I'll Be With You Until The End (by callyha) - comments

[carywary]

Wow such a beautiful chapter. I love how Ruby called her doll Charlie love, and she didn't want to rip the paper, how sweet! That was a lovely moment between them, and you wrote it so well It's lovely that Ruby still has Charlie love, hopefully the doll will be a comfort to her. I liked te sleep fairy, and VJ acting all innocent pretending he didn't know what was going on. I'm glad Leah and Roman got to talk and sort some things out, and it's lovely that she's going to be there for him. Poor Moarg, I wish she would open up to someone, and Angelo keeps giving her the opportunity. Update soon!

[Danni02]

Aww loved that update Cally!

Glad Roman is sorting through things, he seems to be on the right track now! Oh and Leah's feels are still there and growing. Wonder if anything will eventually happen there for her. I loved the Morag and Angelo chat. Glad she spoke to him about something. And then the Charlie and Ruby bit! - I think that says it all! hehe. Hopefully they can start too built up a great relationship now.

Update soon, cant wait for more.

[Chester-Sam]

Aww

They are getting back to how they used to be!

I love Charlie and Ruby's relationship in this fic,

- Sam!

[Inactive User]

Great chapter. Loved it Aww loved the Charlie/Ruby bits It made me want to cry when I read that bit, lol. Update soon xx

[Scotcaz22]

Have to be a quick post cos I'm off to work but just wanted to say brilliant chapter!

Can't wait for the next update!

[carywary]

I'm glad Roman has realised how lucky he is to have Nicole, he needs to appreciate her more! I liked the wee Morag and Angelo bit and how she said he'd grown on her Aww the Charlie/Ruby scene you wrote it so beautifully!! Well done

[HighwayUnicorn]

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[charlie29]

Loved the updates. Loved Ruby as a little girl, and the Charlie Love doll was lovely. So pleased that Charlie and Ruby are united, that scene was lovely. Great writing as usual, more soon please

[mellbell86]

Charlie love. What a great way for Ruby to express her feelings towards Charlie. I loved their little moment together. Finally some joy for the both after such hard times. Hope we get to see more of it.

Finally, Roman, finally! His starting to get a reality check and figure out what's important. Starting wiht his daughter. Silly, Roman! I swear soemtimes, I wanna slap him!

Greta updates. Looking forward to reading more x

[Scotcaz22]

Wow, that was a really, really good chapter! I've forgotten about the teens and that they saw the accident - its good that you pulled them into the story, will be interesting to see how that will turn out and whether if Romeo will talk to Miles.

Loved the last line - "I'm sure. I don't care if I walk again. But I need to breath to be with Ruby" - wow - you can really feel the love from Charlie for Ruby from that line alone - beautiful!

Can't wait for the next update!