I'll Be With You Until The End (by callyha) - comments

[Chester-Sam]

That last line was so sweet, it brought the biggest grin onto my face

And you wrote the experience of being in shock perfectly, I know because I had a huge accident and the shock of it consumed me a day later and it was very similar to how you described it, so well done on that, it was spot on.

- Sam!

Edited August 11, 2010 by Chester-Sam

[Danni02]

Aww that was really well writen Cally! I'd kinda forgotten too that they had all witnessed the accident. You wrote everyone's feelings really well! I loved Marilyns little appearance! hehe. And hopefully Romeo will talk to Miles. Oh goodness, poor Charlie, I'm sure more surgery is the last thing she needs! I loved the last line so much! I got the biggest cheeser on my face as I read it! hehe.

Cant wait for more! Update soon

[Inactive User]

Great chapter

Loved the last line-so sweet

Update soon please xx

[charmed60]

Fantastic chapter. I loved how concerned everyone was for Charlie, I hope the operation goes well.

[freckleface]

The last line made me laugh-it was so sweet!

Bless Romeo, Nicole & Xavier, I like how youfocused on how they were affected by witnessing the accident.

More soon please!

[carywary]

It's really good to see how everyone is coping after the accident, I liked the layout of the chapter. I'm glad Nicole told Roman how she is feeling as he will want to make an effort to try and help her. I loved the wee Miles and Marilyn bit...leopard slippers, totally Marilyn You wrote the Colleen bit really well, her actions were so typically Colleen And I'm glad Leah talked to Rachel about it. Poor Charlie, I hope she'll be ok. And the last line, aww she cares more about Ruby than herself. Great update

[charlie29]

Another lovely chapter. Loved seeing how the accident has impacted on everyone, you wrote that really well Poor Charlie, lets hope the operation works and she can start her rehab again. Felt sorry for the family not being allowed in the room when the doctor spoke to her. Nice to see Morag so supportive. Charlie's last sentence about Ruby was so touching. Can't wait till the next part

[Inactive User]

Great chapter Can't wait to read more soon.

[Chester-Sam]

I love hwo Ruby worries over Charlie, it's so sweet and how they used to be

Hopefully they can get closer than they ever could as sisters.

Good chapter, cant wait to see how the op went,

- Sam!

[freckleface]

Great chapter, the ending was fine

Hope the op goes well!

Update soon please!