I'll Be With You Until The End (by callyha) - comments

[Danni02]

Great update.

I really like the chats the teens had with their parents/gaurdians. It's good that they all have each other to help work through this and they seem to be making some progress, at least, working out why they have all of a sudden started to see the accident again. Hopefully once they find out how Charlie is doing their dreams will stop.

I love how much Ruby was worrying over Charlie at the beginning. Thats exactly how I would imagine her to be. I thought it was sweet that Charlie told them to all go home and rest, but of course they wouldnt listen to her, they would want to be there for when she gets out of surgery. Hopefully the surgery goes well.

Update soon, cant wait for more!

[Scotcaz22]

Loved this chapter!

I loved how that the teens talked to their parents/guardians about what they saw in the accident and how each one explained why they just thought of the accident. I espicaly loved the one with Romeo and Marylin's conversation.

I hope that Charlie's operation will go well Liked the scene with Ruby and Ross outside Charlie's room, that was neat!

Cant wait for the next update!

[carywary]

Great chapter and yes, it works!

I love how concerned Ruby is for Charlie, and how she let Ross comfort her. The wee chats were really good, Marilyn and Romeo really seemed to be getting somewhere, it's nice that all of the teens have someone to open up to I love how Angelo is still at the hospital, and how him and Ruby said they weren't going anywhere , poor Charlie, trying to get them to go home and rest. Update soon

[charlie29]

Great update. Love how all the teens are worrying about how Charlie is, and how they are getting help with it all. Everyone must be so worried about Charlie's operation, love how they all support each other. The ending was fine, looking forward to the next part and hopefully Charlie will make a good recovery. More!!

[Chester-Sam]

I loved Ross' comparison between Ruby and Charlie, and I'm glad she took it well

Operation was a success! Can't wait for part 2

You are a legend Cally

- Sam!

[Danni02]

Aww I liked that one. Nice comparison between Ruby and Charlie

Glad Charlie's surgery went well and that the teens are coping a little better. Hopefully they can see Charlie soon or find out from someone how she is.

Looking forward to more.

[Inactive User]

Aww loved it Looking forwards to read next update soon You are a good writer

[mellbell86]

Ruby doing little things that mirror Charlie, that's cute. Love the little bits about her being a baby and being identical with Charlie. I'm sure it means a lot to Ruby to hear all these things and it will help her in the long run. I love how she still recognizes Ross as her 'dad'. That's a nice touch. Another surgery, poor Charlie. I hope she wakes up soon and her breathing returns back to normal. She's been through so much.

Looking forward to reading more xx

[charlie29]

Ah two lovely updates. So pleased the operation was a success, hopefully Charlie will be able to start her rehab again soon. The teens are so caring, its nice that they have come to the hospital to support Ruby and to see Charlie. Love the way the whole family and Angelo are there for Charlie. Really well written, the emotions are perfect. Can't wait for more

[carywary]

Two lovely updates Cally

Part 1 - I loved Ross and Ruby's wee chat, how Ruby was really happy to know she had always looked and acted like Charlie, right down to her mannerisms, and when Ruby said that Ross was still her Dad, aww. And I like the way Morag and Angelo's relationship has improved so much, she can see right through him and at least he knows how much it means to all of them to have him there. I think it's really good that Xavier, Nicole and Romeo are talking about what they saw, and are trying to help each other through it, and talking to the adults really seemed to help clarify things. Charlie has so much support around her, I love how it finished with them all waiting for her to wake up to make sure she was ok

Part 2 - Poor Nicole, it looks like she's really suffering cos of Roman, it's really good that she has Romeo and Xavier to try and help her work through things, it's awful that she feels she can't get advice from her dad. I love how Ruby slept while holding Charlie's hand, I don't know how Charlie would get through this if Ruby hadn't come round about Charlie being her mum, it's so good that Charlie knows she is there for her. I love Angelo's determination, he's been off work, and the first thing he will do when he goes back is get stuck into the case I'm looking forward to see how Romeo, Nicole and Xavier being at the hospital plays out, I'm glad that Ross and Morag have assured them it was ok to come, hopefully that will ease the tension a bit.

Looking forward to the next chapter