I'll Be With You Until The End (by callyha) - comments

[Danni02]

Great update!

Loved all the teens going to the hospital to see if Charlie was okay, and hopefully that will help them dealing with their problems too. Its a shame Nicole feels she cant get help from Roman, but he has had a pretty bad time lately so I can see why she feels that. It made me smile when I read Angelo got the coffee's and sandwiches in! hehe. And I loved how Ruby was sleeping as she held onto Charlie. Such as lovely image.

More soon please. Love this so much!

[mellbell86]

A sweet update. Angelo waking before everyone and going to get them coffee, his really caring of them all and I sure hope he gets a chance to be more so with Charlie later on. Ruby holding Charlies hand and other arm looped together was so beautiful. Ruby's back to the start but they are finally moving on and hopefully get a little closure on certain issues which we've seen. Wonder what's next when Ruby wakes up? The teens all coming together and show support to Charlie, that's really sweet and hopefully it will help them too. They have been through a lot with emotions so it's another stepping stone for them. Hope they can all get through it together.

Can't wait for more updates. Keep writing xx

[Scotcaz22]

Totally loved both parts!

Liked that the whole family were there for Charlie and Ruby

Cool that the teens came by the hospital and that Ross & Morag didn't mind them being there - they needed it.

Can't wait for the next update

[Chester-Sam]

I love how Ruby has realised that she needs Charlie and can't be away from her, it's so sweet and emotional :')

When Charlie woke up and realised that there was no more pain and that Ruby was with her, waiting, it was beautiful.

Great job on another amazing chapter Cally, I, as always, look forward to more

- Sam!

[Inactive User]

Great chapter

Loved how the teens arrived at the hospital to see Charlie

Loved the ending

More soon please xx

[Danni02]

Aww I liked that update. I am glad that the teens got to see Charlie, and they already felt a whole lot better after just seeing her. Loved Xavier's cheeky wee comment about Charlie helping them get out of trouble with the other officers Ruby is being sweet not wanting to talk to Charlie about the accident after all she has been through lately, but I think she needs to talk to someone, it would help her a lot if she did. Perhaps Angelo could be of service?!

Great update. Cant wait for more

Oh and I know what you mean about the reaction to the comments, I'm probably the same!

[Inactive User]

*returns a hug back to Callyha*

Loved this chapter. Great work, mate. I do react the same too about the comments I have for my fanfiction from my lovely readers e.g. you and Danni, everyone.

Loved Charlie and Ruby's talk

Liked how the teens arrived to see Charlie and loved how they felt better after seeing her

Update soon please

[charlie29]

Loving this so much! Charlie and Ruby's talk was lovely, Ruby definately needs to start looking after herself now that Charlie is a bit better. Was good for the teens to see Charlie and hopefully they can move on from the accident and be there for Ruby. Looking forward to the next part, great writing as always

[Scotcaz22]

That was really a nice chapter.

Hopefully, after seeing Charlie, the teens will be okay now and move forward.

Loved the scene between Charlie and Ruby. Just lovely.

Can't wait for the next update!

[mellbell86]

I'm not getting updates to my email, makes me want to cry! So glad, I happened to check the forum and see I've missed 2 updates but loved catching up. Can I say I'm excited how the recent chapter ended. It's so sweet and gives so much hope for Charlie and Angelo, I hope there is hope for them ;)

The way you write all the teens is really good, it's full of mixture and really captures everyone. I don't know how you can keep up with them all cause you write them all so true to their character. Charlie will get more progress, I hope. Poor girl, been through so much and to face those bars must be exhausting but I know she will do it. She has so much support around her and love.

Great chapter and the one before that. Can't wait to read more. I'm excited xx

Edited August 16, 2010 by mellbell86