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Great update Cally!

Aww poor teens! :( That's just whats they needed on their first day back at school. James was mean :angry: And Charlie, poor girl! All this must be so hard for her. Hopefully she can make some progress soon, I know she will get there in the end! The last scene was just :wub: really. Aww Angelo he is just so sweet! Had to laugh when Tish refered to Angelo as Charlie's boyfriend, there has to be someone between them if she is thinking that :P hehe. Hopefully one day it will true. I can see it happening :P

Update soon! Loving this!!

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Once again, a great chapter. Loved the bit with the teens at school. Poor poor Charlie, she must feel so exhausted, but with all the support around her, she'll be back on her feet one day. Love love love Angelo in this fic, he is so sweet and is really helping to motivate Charlie. Loved it :)

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Aww great update Cally. Very descriptive. Hope Charlie is able to make some progress soon. I love how everyone is there waiting at the end for Charlie. So sweet.

Update soon :D

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I loved this chapter. Seeing Charlie go through all that pain is hard but seeing how much she is accomplishing just by taking those small steps is amazing. Bless, Ruby for standing in front of her mum, that really gave Charlie the push she needed. It was a nice touch. I really loved this chapter :wub:

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I loved this chapter, very descriptive and written to perfection :)

Bless Ruby for standing at the end, and Charlie pushing herself "If only for a hug"

A very emotional chapter, look forward to the next chapter Cally,

- Sam!

Oh and you're not taking too long with the recovery, it's realistic and you should write it however it goes in your head ;)

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Great chapter, I think its good that you are showing Charlie's recovery properly. I agree that in the show most people are up and about in 2 episodes normally, so this is more realistic. Charlie is doing really well, and its so nice that all her family are with her every step of the way. Just hope that Charlie hasn't pushed herself too far this time. Absolutely loving this :)

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You're definately not making it to long! I hate it when suddenly they're up and running around after getting hit by a car or summin. And its a really good opportunity to see Charlie's emotions over the recovery period.

It was nice to see how Ruby gave Charlie the strength to carry on and walk!

I hope things will get better for her!

More soon please :D

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