I'll Be With You Until The End (by callyha) - comments

[Danni02]

Great update Cally!

The start was kinda funny with Angelo and his little thoughts hehe. Bless him. Aww Leah was sweet with her little plan of swapping the bedrooms so that Charlie didnt have stairs and stuff to deal with! I'm glad that Ruby likes the idea of them staying there and that Ross and Morag accepted it too. So glad that they have found who did this to Charlie!! Hopefully they will be behind bars soon! Hopefully Charlie's rehab session goes well.

Update soon, loving this!

[HighwayUnicorn]

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Edited September 17, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn

[Danni02]

Awesome update, once again!

So Roman and Leah could be getting it on soon! I love Leah's loyalty to Charlie and that she wants to talk to her about it all first. That's one great friend. Poor Xavier missing Ruby! Hopefully he will get a catch up with her soon and get to be there to support her. Loved Romeo's comment about it not being interesting. At all. Great news that they are getting closer to catching these guys too! Loved Charlie's efforts to get herself out of bed. Must have been hard for her but so worth it. She is improving and thats great. And what's with that ending!! You cant leave it there, killing me with the cliffhanger!!

Update soon. Love this so much!

[ldscott]

Great chapters, Loved Romans "Fall" lol

Hope they are going to tell Charlie that she can go home!

Update soon!

[lino]

I come back from my holidays, with all your amazing updates. I had such a good time reading them all. it is so great to see how all is taking shape in your fic. Thanks so much and can't wait to read more soon.

[mellbell86]

Leave us in suspense like that. No fair, Cally ;) Another great chapter. So glad they have the guys who did this, it's one less thing Charlie has to worry about now and it also seems her rehab session went good today so hopefully Tish has some good news to tell everyone. Finally, finally, Roman sorts some of that whirlpool of mess in his head. I mean it's only taken him what, ah who cares, but finally he admits some of his feelings.. Good boy!

Looking forward to more. Loving it xx

[charlie29]

Sorry for the lack of comments, have just caught up Some great updates there, loved the flashback scenes with Angelo realising his feelings for Charlie. Nice to see the progress that Charlie is making, just hope the cliffhanger will be good news!! So pleased that Ruby and Charlie will be living together at Leahs - and nice that Leah is such a supportive friend to them both. Love VJ in this fic, he obviously loves Charlie very much. Really looking forward to the next part, keep the brilliant writing up

[Inactive User]

Great chapter-had read every word of it and it's really good Can't wait to see what the results would be...hopefully they will be good so Charlie can go home. Update soon xx

[carywary]

Hey, I was away there for a few days so I'm just catching up.

Chapter 49 - Really liked that bit at the start. And how Angelo knew something was up with the teens, and giving Nicole a hug. I loved the wee Charlie and Ruby chat, although Ruby can't talk to anyone else I'm glad she still feels she can talk to Charlie, although I wish she would talk to someone who could help her with her bad dreams. I'm glad the teens feel better now, after seeing that Charlie is ok.

Chapter 50 - It was lovely of Romeo to stick up for Nicole, the last thing she needs right now is to be hassled. I'm glad though that everyone saw the article and understands now, and it's not like the teens were going around telling everyone, using it as an excuse for things. I love how everyone is there for Charlie, and the bit where Angelo said "but she didn't say no to me" was brilliant and he managed to calm her down, and her metallic leg doesn't seem to bother him

Chapter 51 - You're not taking too long, it was a serious accident and Charlie is healing in realistic time, not in tv time.

I loved how Ruby stood in front of the bars, and the fact that she and the others were there gave Charlie the encouragement and determination to keep going and try and work through the pain. You wrote this brilliantly, I could feel the pain throughout it, and how hard it was to move her legs.

Chapter 52 - I love how when everyone else goes home, Angelo is still there VJ is so sweet, wanting to see Charlie, and I love how he had a wee surprise for her. I thought it was lovely Morag wanting to get Charlie some proper food, and I really hope that they will have a closer relationship now. And I liked the wee chat between Nicole and Roman.

Chapter 53 - Aw VJ is sooo sweet!! The soup analogy was funny, especially the reactions it got from the others. And the photo thing was such a lovely idea, I'm sure Charlie will treasure it, I loved seeing her reactions to all of the photos. I love how Ruby hugged Angelo when she arrived, and yayy, she knows Angelo loves Charlie. I'm glad that Ruby still wants to live with Charlie

Chapter 54 - I love how you did both Charlie and Ruby's reactions to "we're ok Charlie", we got a real insight into some of Ruby's worries about what others would think and what Charlie wants to be called, and if saying Dad will remind Charlie of being raped. The bit with Angelo arguing with himself over whether Charlie loved him or not was funny. I loved all of his recollections about things that had happened between them, the "undies" one was really funny, and I loved how after the warehouse incident he just held Charlie. Nice wee finish with Roman and Nicole, I wonder if he is going to say something, and to whom?? Loved this chapter.

Chapter 55 - Awk poor Angelo waiting to go into the hospital and then getting called away. I loved how he took one last look at the hospital though. Leah is so lovely, I think it will be good to have Charlie in familiar surroundings, and I'm sure she'll be happy wherever she is as long as Ruby is there with her. And I'm glad Ross and Morag were ok with it. I'm so glad Angelo was able to identify the woman who pushed the boat onto Charlie, and I liked the wee scene with Georgiana, and the really big present!! Loved how they couldn't see Angelo behind the card!

Chapter 56 - Loved Roman's methods of stalling, brilliant! And Charlie is improving so much, I would say knowing that the person has been found gave her that extra little push. I'm glad Roman doesn't want to be with Charlie, and I hope he can make Leah happy. I wonder what has happened Charlie's readings??

Update soon!

[Danni02]

Super update Cally!

I loved everyone thoughts. Especially Angelo's! He loves her so much, I wish he would tell her, but at the same time I kinda think she has enough to deal with right now with her recovery. I loved Morag's(?) thoughts. Made me laugh. And then her asking for answers. Could see her being like that on the show. It's so great that Charlie had advanced to crutches! She must feel so pleased to be improving and the day she can leave the hospital is getting even closer!

VJ is a smart kid. I'm glad he is okay with the idea of Roman and Leah dating but think its good of them not to do anything (well apart from the cheeky wee kiss) without talking to Charlie first. I love how you write Romeo and often get a wee chuckle at things you make him say! Loved that all the teens are going to pay Ruby a visit. It might to her good to spend some time with her friends away from all the stress and stuff she's been through lately. Just let her relax and have a little fun. Well I hope the teens are right and Gina wont mind them going, as I guess they are supposed to be at school right now!

Amazing stuff once again! I cant wait for more!

Edited August 23, 2010 by Danni02