I'll Be With You Until The End (by callyha) - comments

[Inactive User]

Great update, Carolyn! Nice stuff you had written there. Update soon pleasseee xx

[HighwayUnicorn]

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[ldscott]

Again, another great chapter. I love how you are able to perfectly show how each character is feeling about the situation.

Your writing is beautiful and I wanna see how it all pans out when Leah and Roman talk to Charlie!

Can't wait for the next installment!

Lisa x

[lino]

And again a super written chapter. I just love the way you include VJ in your story. I also can't wait to see what Charlie will say, about the whole Roman and Leah situation.

Thanks again for your chapter.

[carywary]

I hope long is good! Cos sometimes I get carried away! But that's a good thing cos it means it was an amazing chapter!

Yayy Charlie got good news and I love how it was so emotional. I loved Angelo's thoughts, that he wanted to be with her to the end of their lives The bit with Leah, Roman and VJ was funny them pretending they were watching him, he's a smart kid! It's good that he's ok with Leah and Roman, now just to sort things out with Charlie. I hope it works out for them. Aww Xavier missing Ruby like a love-sick puppy . I hope Charlie gets the encouragement she needs to try and master using crutches, she's come too far to let something like this stand in her way of recovery, and she has great support around her, they'll all be there every step of the way. Great update!

[Inactive User]

Great chapter

Good to see Charlie doing well And loved the sweet moment with Ruby

Update soon xx

[HighwayUnicorn]

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[Danni02]

Aww this just keeps getting better and better! This is so awesome. I love it!

Oooh Mr Looms didnt seem happy there! And the teens have to go to school for 2 hours on a saturday! Bad times! Sure its worth it for Xavier to see Ruby though. I loved Miles' 'He's a happy soul' Angelo at the end made me go awwwww. Picking up the crutches to help Charlie. He is sooo lovely. Liked the little bit between Roman and Leah. I hope the talk with Charlie goes well.

Cant wait for more!

[ldscott]

Aww how sweet is angelo? I love the way he is supporting her.

Update soon!

[carywary]

Haha I love your choice of word!

Lovely update. Mr Looms doesn't sound very nice I think it's good that the teens want to go and see Charlie and Ruby, but I'm glad they won't fall behind with their work, and it would have been easy for Gina to say no with Mr Looms there watching. I loved the bit with Angelo on the crutches, trying to help Charlie, aww and the finish with Ruby was lovely, you can see how much it means to Charlie to have her there. I'm looking forward to seeing how Charlie reacts to what Leah has to tell her. Great!