I'll Be With You Until The End (by callyha) - comments

[HighwayUnicorn]

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Edited September 17, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn

[Danni02]

Awesome update.

Oh Robert Young! I dont like him one bit! I gasped when I heard his plans for the boat! How can someone do that! grrr him. I'm glad that no one is giving out the officers names and I really hope he doesnt find out! And Colleen 'Constable Risotto" You gotta love Colleen! I loved the ending with Charlie walking on the crutches, and Angelo once again doing it along with her, its sweet.

Cant wait for the next one!

[carywary]

You've been busy! I was on my duke of edinburgh this weekend, so I'm just getting caught up.

Chapter 59 - Wow, loved this. I think it was good that Ruby got away for a bit to clear her head although it must have been hard for them to see the boat, I hope that doesn't set them all back a bit. But I'm wondering what Nicole saw? I'm glad Morag and Ross have faith in Angelo to help Charlie. I LOVED the scene in the hospital room I love how she lets him in on what she's really feeling, and how she allows him to comfort her, and I loved how in turn, Angelo shared his fear with her that she was dead. I just loved all of this, brilliant!!

Chapter 60 - Wow I didn't think that's what Nicole had seen, so well done! I'm glad Roman and Nicole had that wee chat, it's good that she's up-to-date with everything. And it's good that Irene reassured Xavier that they'd done the right thing in taking Ruby away from the hospital. I LOVED the wee bit in italics, I'm convinved it's Angelo, and what Charlie said to him you wrote it so well. I love how she placed her hand on her leg and then on her tummy, and the other one on Angelo's hand. This has got to be one of my favourite moments in your fiction so far!! Amazing!

Chapter 61 - I love how Angelo is so happy now, cos he wants to be with her but he was afraid it would only be until she got out of hospital. And Morag's "we're not arguing, we're talking passionately" typical Morag! I love how Ruby is so concerned about Charlie, and although she is glad to get away from the hospital she can't stop thinking about Charlie lying there. And I love how Morag is looking out for everyone, she is able to comfort Ross and calm him down which is good. I love how everyone else noticed Angelo looking so happy and cheery, but he won't tell as if they can't guess!

I love your fiction, it just keeps getting better and better!

[carywary]

Whoops, you managed to slip another update in there while I was commenting! Even better!

Robert Young no wonder Roman punched him, and he was sorry for it but Irene's reply just made me laugh It's good that someone will take a stand against it all, and Roman did warn him to stay away. I can't believe he wants to take advantage of what happened to Charlie and Angelo to make more money.

I love how Angelo was there to help Charlie again and how Ruby and Ross are giving her the encouragement she needs to keep going with her rehab so that one day she can get rid of her brace. Well done

[Chester-Sam]

Sorry for the lack of reviews from me but I've had a lot on and then my Grandad died :'(

But I'm back now and think your last few chapters have been amazing as always Cally!

The emotional shift that took place in Charlie was fantastic and written to perfection. I'm glad Angelo is helping like he is.

Poor Ruby seeing the place where it happened, but I loved the little exchange of names at the end between Charlie and Ruby.

You're writing this in such a realistic way, more realistic than the show and a lot better!

Keep up the marvelous job,

- Sam!

[charlie29]

Great update! I don't like that Robert - hope he's not going to cause any trouble for Charlie or Angelo. Good to see Charlie's recovery going well again, hopefully she will have her operation soon and get rid of that brace. I love this story and look forward to every update

[Inactive User]

Great update.

I hate that Robert guy Hope he won't do anything stupid

Good to see Charlie recovering well

Update soon please xx

[lino]

I really hope Roman will not get more troubles. Thanks again for the update.

[HighwayUnicorn]

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Edited September 17, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn

[Danni02]

Ooh loved that update Cally!

I loved Alf's "Flamin' mongrel" then shaking Roman's hand. Hopefully this Robert never finds out the names of the officers! Poor Georgina! She seemed run of her feet in the station! And an arrest? Hoping its the scum who did this to Charlie and Angelo! Loved the little talk with Irene and Charlie. Loved what Irene said about hitting people with the crutches. Made me chuckle! Hopefully Charlie will say yes to this surgery, although poor Charlie having to have yet another operation!

Cant wait fot more. Update soon

Edited August 30, 2010 by Danni02