I'll Be With You Until The End (by callyha) - comments

[charlie29]

Two great updates and they did answer my question lol! Poor Charlie reliving those memories and Angelo was great for getting her out of the room quickly. Glad rubys idea will work although I'm sure Charlie will still find it hard to look at the pictures. Nicole seems to be figuring things out...... More soon!!

[Danni02]

Loved that one!! (I feel like I always say this, but its true, I really did love it!)

I loved the teens trying to work out why Ruby would call Ross, 'Ross' instead of 'Dad'. Of course Colleen had to evesdrop and hear everything! And Xavier may only have been joking but little does he know he is right! Wonder what Colleen is going to do now after hearing this! Loved it when Xavier said about the snorkles, poor Colleen! VJ is sooo sweet, bless him. And he wanted to stay with Charlie in the hospital, aww. I'm sure Charlie will love her teddy. Well Toby's mum wasnt very nice, but I'm glad that Leah didnt care what she thought! The stuff with Charlie and everyone at the station was so lovely. She is so brave for being able to face seeing those people again and I love how Ruby was there to comfort her and Angelo's hug. The last little part with Charlie and Ruby made me 'awwww' So lovely! They have such a strong bond, love it!

Cant wait for more of this, I'm hooked!

[charlie29]

Loved it! Charlie was so brave for going back in there, hope she will be ok. The ending was lovely, Ruby and Charlie have come a long way and its nice that they have that bond. Loved the bit with VJ, he loves Charlie so much and was so sweet wanting to get her a present. The teens trying to figure out the whole Ruby/Ross stuff was great. Poor Collen and the snorkles lol. Can't wait for more!

[Rach Loves H&A]

Loved the update!

I'm glad Charlie managed to face her fears and look at the face of her attackers and that she had Angelo there with her. I hope their relationship develops better now that Leah and Roman are together.

Can't wait for the next update!!

Edited September 23, 2010 by Rach Loves H&A

[carywary]

Oh that ending was lovely, I loved the way Angelo rushed over to Charlie and just held her, and the way she was leaning on him and he was comforting her and then how Charlie was leaning on Ruby. It's so nice that Ruby wanted to go in with Charlie, to be there for her and to try and help her through it. Toby's mum, what was she thinking? If Charlie's ok with it then it's nothing to do with her! VJ is so cute, I loved how he went and picked her a teddy, aww. And Colleen, I wonder if she'll figure something out, or will she just outright ask them! You never know with Colleen but I'm sure thinking about it will occupy her time anyway! Loving this, great work Cally!

[HighwayUnicorn]

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Edited September 17, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn

[ldscott]

Poor Charlie! Hope that woman has that smile wiped off her face soon!

Lisa x

[Inactive User]

Great chapter

Poor Charlie!

Uh oh pray Colleen better not do anything stupid since she overheard!

Loved Ruby comforting Charlie-so sweet

Update soon xx

[Danni02]

Great update.

Aww I love the teens still thinking about the whole Ross/Dad thing with Ruby, makes me laugh a little. Oh no, Angelo will be gutted he was taken off the case, he wanted to do this so much for Charlie! But at the same time I kinda understand why he was. Hopefully Georgie will be able to take over, will not be good if they can get out!! Even though the Charlie/Ruby was short it was soooo sweet and lovely.

Cant wait for more. I love this!

[HighwayUnicorn]

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Edited September 17, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn