I'll Be With You Until The End (by callyha) - comments

[ldscott]

Interesting chapter, wonder if Colleen will work it out before the teens?

Lisa x

[Inactive User]

Great chapter

The teens should be talking about it somewhere in private out of earshot from Colleen. I agree with idscott. Hopefully the teens will guess Colleen was overhearing their conversation and would tell her to keep it quiet.

Awww loved the Charlie/Ruby scene

Update soon xx

[carywary]

Aw that was lovely, I don't have time for a normal/long (debatable ) comment, I know, it's wierd for me!! Loved that, and I hope Georgie can continue it on. I loved the chuby moment at the end, and also how Morag is being strong for both her and Ross, he couldn't do this without her!! Colleen but you've got to love her! Good update

[charlie29]

Great update, loved the Ruby/Charlie scene it was lovely. Hope Georgina will carry on the case and solve it for Charlie's sake, poor Angelo for going that far with it. Looking forward to next part

[Danni02]

Aww I loved that one! (again)

Charlie/Ruby centric is fine with me.

"Dig a hole and put her in it" That made me chuckle!

I am so glad that Georgie is able to take over the case! It could be hard for Angelo to try and not ask Georgie questions about it though, but hopefully it is all over in the next week for Charlie's sake! I loved the Ruby/Chalrie stuff so much. So sweet! They really do have a lovely bond.

Cant wait for more of this! Update soon

[Chester-Sam]

Charlie/Ruby centric is more than okay

I love the little moments between them, they're just so seet

- Sam!

[carywary]

That was just lovely, especially the ending, loved the heart-to-heart, it was beautiful, you're such a good writer. I loved especially the bit where Charlie said that she couldn't have gotten through it if Ruby hadn't been growing inside her, Ruby helped her through it all even before she was born, amazing. It's so good that Charlie and Ruby still have such a close relationship that Ruby can talk to Charlie about these things and not bottle them up. I loved how Charlie came out of the room and hugged Ross, and Morag hugged Charlie, I love the relationship Charlie and Ruby have with Morag Haha I wonder if Angelo will be able to refrain from asking Georgie about the case...not sure, maybe she should stay away from him! It would be so good if it was resolved soon though, they've all been through a lot. Love this!

[Rach Loves H&A]

Loved the Charlie/Ruby centric!

Would love to have some more of Charlie and Angelo and i hope their relationship progresses further now that they have the people who caused the accident.

Update Soon!!

[Inactive User]

Great chapter

Awww loved the Charlie/Ruby parts. So sweet and beautiful, well-written!

Update soon xxxx

[HighwayUnicorn]

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Edited September 19, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn