I'll Be With You Until The End (by callyha) - comments

[Danni02]

Loved it Cally!

I loved the teens messing with Colleen. Its funny she kept going back to near their table. The stuff with Irene and Colleen's writing of the orders made me laugh so much!

Charlie smiled. "No more tears" Charlie said as she wiped her own face "Only smiles, ok?"

Ruby nodded "Only smiles"

That was so sweet, made me 'awwww'

And loved Rubys line about waterproof mascara!

Loved the little Charlie and Angelo parts! The stuff with the crutches made me laugh! I love the humour you add to your fics! And he kissed her

Cant wait for more!

Edited September 28, 2010 by Danni02

[Inactive User]

Great chapter

Awwww gonna love the Charlie/Ruby parts! So sweet

Update soon xxx

[Rach Loves H&A]

Great Update!!!!

Loved the Charlie and Angelo bit, looking forward to see how their relationship.

Also Coleen being her noisy self, kept listening in on what they were saying, loved that the teens were messing with her.

Update Soon!!!!

[HighwayUnicorn]

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Edited September 19, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn

[carywary]

That was lovely. Colleen is hilarious I could just picture her hanging round their table, scribbling the orders down quickly and then dropping the spray, they worked that one well, it'll sure give her something to tell Madge Wilkins! And Angelo told Charlie he loved her it's a pity he can't find anything out about the case, but hopefully it won't take too long. I love how Ruby and Ross are still ok after all of this, even though she's calling him Ross now. I wonder if Colleen will say something...or will she just try and eavesdrop in their conversation? Update soon!!

[HighwayUnicorn]

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Edited September 19, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn

[Rach Loves H&A]

Really Good Update!!

I felt sorry for Charlie feeling like that with everyone staring at her. Loved the Charlie and Angelo section, looking forward to their relationship progressing.

Update Soon!!!

[Inactive User]

Liked it.

Can't wait to see how Xavier reacts to it when Ruby tells him.

Poor Charlie.

Update soon xx

Edited October 1, 2010 by ~JarlieFanEver~

[carywary]

Aw, Colleen dropping the plate I love how Angelo's place is now beside Charlie and how cute was he when he was wanting to hold her hand. Ooh Ruby is telling Xavier...I wonder if she will actually come out and say Charlie is her mum or will she regret it and freak out before then? I can't wait to the next chapter to find out! Great as usual!

[Danni02]

Loved that updated!

The part on the beach with Charlie and Angelo was sweet, bless him, wanting to hold her hand but not really being able too. Had to chuckle when he said about the view from behind and then Charlie threatening to hit him again! haha and the little kiss too. And I liked how Nicole got herself and Romeo out of the room so Xavier could talk to Ruby. And she started to tell him...oh wonder how thats going to go!

Cant wait for more, update soon