I'll Be With You Until The End (by callyha) - comments

[Inactive User]

WHAT??? It's almost over??? No!! What a pity because I loved reading this fanfiction

Great chapter!

Loved how Ruby accepted Charlie is her mother. So sweet!

Update soon please xxxxx

[lino]

I loved the lovely chat between Charlie and Leah. That is what real Friendship is all about. Being there for each other, and not expecting anything in return.

Thanks so much for all the updates, which i didn't comment on, but did read.

[Danni02]

Amazing update Cally. Loved it.

I love how you write Dexter, so in character.

Aww yeh, I am glad that everyone is helping. Although I didnt doubt anyone would say no. Colleen made me chuckle when she said she couldnt help as she was family. Aww bless Colleen. I loved the chat with Charlie and Leah. They are such good friends.

And no, course it wasnt a biggy about the line like the fic title! But was nice of you to say something.

Really dont want this one to end But I guess all good things must come to an end!

Update soon. Looking forward to seeing how this court stuff goes!

[Scotcaz22]

I haven't commented much but I just wanted you to know that I've read all the updates!

And, trust me, I have really, really enjoyed reading all the updates, all the developments between Charlie and Angelo, between Leah & Roman, Ruby and Xavier. Each relationship has been very different from each other but all were awesome and I look forward to more developments.

I've really enjoyed reading about Ruby & Charlie's relationship - one from sister/sister changing to mother/daughter and the obstacles and attiudes they've faced and fought and shared everything - that was just awesome!

I loved the teens in this - they all have been brilliant to Ruby and Xavier - especially after they have found out about Ruby and Charlie - I'm sure that at the back of their minds they are curious as to what happened but are keeping quiet and being there for them both and being supportive. That was brilliant!

I loved the chat between Leah and Charlie in this chapter - just lovely - oh and I must mention that it is really adorable how that VJ look up to Charlie and making sure that she was okay etc.

Lovely!

[carywary]

Ah, sorry I've missed your last few updates, silly Speech Day leaving me so tired! Anyway I am loving this so much, I'm sad you're near the end, the last few chapters have been as amazing as the first few, you've been so consistent throughout

There's just so much to say I have to do it chapter by chapter, I shall try to keep it brief-ish for each chapter!

Chapter 92

Wow...this chapter was breathtaking, I don't know how you found the words for the scene with Ross and Elsie after Charlie told them about the rape, and you portrayed the emotions so clearly, wow. And the bit with Ross and Angelo was lovely, "you can make it official" Morag is doing really well trying to get through to Ruby, it's been a shock to her too and she's holding up really well.

Chapter 93

Haha some things don't change, Dex will always be Dex, I don't think he'll be having a personality transformation anytime soon! I liked the scene with Rachel and Xavier, hopefully she can make him see that what's done is done and he has to get past it. I wish Ruby would stop blaming herself for it all coming out in the diner, she just needs to be there for Charlie. Loving all of the Charlie/Angelo/Ruby interactions

Chapter 94

Aw VJ is so cute! It must have been so hard for Charlie and Ruby to go into the diner. I thought it was lovely the way Indi was looking out for Charlie and saw she was in pain. I loved how Ruby was able to finish the "because I'm her daughter" bit, it's so good that they've been able to work through all of this and be there for each other.

Chapter 95

The "Charlie and I are related" bit made me laugh typical Colleen!! It's good they are all so willing to help, and they seem to have realised how hard this all is on Charlie and Ruby, they need all the help they can get. Poor Ross, it must be so hard to see Charlie falling apart like that, it's good that he has Morag, but if she is being his shoulder to cry on, who does she go to? Wow Indi is being very loyal, and Dex, well he's just being Dex. Loved the scene with Leah and Charlie, their friendship has just got a lot deeper and more meaningful. It's good that Leah hasn't completely freaked out and she's still there for Charlie.

Wow, I can't wait to read more!! Although I sort of don't want to, cos then it will be one step closer to being over...

[Inactive User]

Great chapter. Liked it

Aww loved Leah and Charlie's friendship

Update soon xxx

[HighwayUnicorn]

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Edited October 5, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn

[Danni02]

Great update

Glad everyone has spoken to the police and hopefully this is all over for everyone soon! Once again I loved the Charlie and Leah interaction. So lovely, poor poor Charlie feeling like that Glad she has a great friend like Leah to confide in.

Loving this. Looking forward to more

[Inactive User]

Great chapter Just got home from work to see a new chapter waiting for me, hehe Loved Leah and Charlie's friendship. Loving it Looking forwards to read more of this soon xx

[carywary]

Loved the bit with Charlie and Leah, it was nice to hear how the Aunty Charlie thing came about, and the bond that her and Leah share, it was so good that Charlie was able to confide in Leah about things she can't tell Angelo or her family, about how hard she's finding it.

It was good to hear the different people make their contribution by telling the police what they saw happen. Colleen's was just plain Colleen and extremely funny! Maybe it's just me, but the thing that stuck out for me was when Roman said that 3 men couldn't move the boat, so how could 1 woman. Not sure if that's anything I guess we'll find out!! Fantastic as usual Cally!