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It's official, Angelo has appeared :D I hope they'll be bumping into each other a lot more often!! I love the Jack and Charlie work colleagues/friends thing going on, it's good that she knows she has someone to talk to, even if she doesn't want to talk. And I'm glad all the teens were fine with Charlie's age and didnt' freak out, although the Poppy story obviously upset her. And I loved Dex's reaction to the lack of slapping etc between Ruby and Indi :lol: It's good she has Nicole, I hope Charlie understands that she only told her cos there's only so long she can bottle things up for and she just had to tell someone or else Charlie would get it all and she knows Charlie feels bad enough about it all. Colleen :rolleyes: she will never change! But that's why we love her, you write her character so perfectly with all of her little mannerisms. Keep up the good work Cally!

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MUCHLY cooooooooooool chapter, particularly the scenes that included ....

Indi's "Again, that's what boys do",

Charlie's "I'd love to have another one, but I don't think I'll get the chance again"

and MOST especially

"Its mum I feel sorry for. She's had this type of reaction from her boyfriends. I've never had it. What Indi said was not even close to what Matt, Robert and Bill said to her. And yet I'm like this" Ruby threw her hands to, show her upset "Mum has always had it hard. Everyone was ok with mum having a daughter, until they found out her age. Everyone would assume she looked younger than she was"

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Great update Cally!

Aww Angelo, bless him. I think someone likes Charlie....:P I loved Marilyn questioning him about it and Alf just leaving him too it. As usual I loved all the stuff with Charlie and Ruby. I'm glad Charlie was okay with Ruby telling Nicole about what had happened, and also, that Ruby told her that she confided in Nicole about it. Hopefully Charlie will be able to talk about it to someone (Leah?) soon. Maybe her finally talking about it all (and not getting treated like she did when she tried to open up in the past) will help her feel better about it all in the long run, and she can move on and feel happier in herself. Okay, so I'll stop now cos I am kinda rambling......anyhoo, cant wait for more of this Cally! Update soon :D

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Loved this chapter Cally! You write Marilyn and Alf SO perfectly!! And I loved Angelo's reaction to seeing Charlie :wub: and that fact that Leah and Charlie are going there for dinner, I am slightly suspicious that Charlie initiated it in this particular venue :D I'm glad Charlie was ok with Ruby confiding in Nicole, well not that she actually told her but it's nice that she'll be able to talk to her about it and Charlie won't mind. I hope Charlie confides in Leah because she could really do with a friend, and I know she sort of has Jack but he's a man and he's a policeman so she'd always be afraid of him looking at things differently. Loving this Cally, thankyou!

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Angelo loves Charlie, Angelo loves Charlie :wub: :wub:

^ The fact that I could act five years old there & get away with it :wink:

I loved that update Cally ... I always love every update.

Once again, the relationships between everyone were written beautifully.

& as per usual of course, the characterisation of everyone too.

Well done & I look forward to more.

Love Carina xxx :wub:

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