JosieTash Posted March 11, 2011 Report Share Posted March 11, 2011 COOOL that Charlie didn’t get mad at Rubes for telling Nic. The ending was intriguing .... Charlie and the card. Really liked the banter tween the police officers, including Lizzie .....who I imagine is the pony tailed blonde we often see, but i don’t think has ever said a word, on screen in the show. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted March 16, 2011 Report Share Posted March 16, 2011 (edited) Nice update.It's good that they're both building up their own friendship groups.Drunk Martha was really funny. Edited March 16, 2011 by Red Ranger 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danni02 Posted March 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2011 (edited) Great update Cally Liked all the banter with teens and drunk Martha was funny!! The opening with Charlie and her bruise and sadness....whats happened....something with stupid Matt I'd expect... Loved the ending with Charlie and Angelo. He's sweet offering to walk her home. Maybe it is for the best she has someone there as she is a little tipsy! Made me laugh when she spilled the water over him and started wiping it away with her hand, and when she couldn't remember his name so he bumped into her and she remember! good one....Nice that Rachel asked her to go to the hen night, she seems to be fitting in well and making some nice friends! Update soon. Edited March 16, 2011 by Danni02 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted March 16, 2011 Report Share Posted March 16, 2011 Angelo & Charlie were really sweet. Angelo walking Charlie home, what a gentleman. Not a lot of guys do that now a days - I just hope that when I find Mr Perfect, he's worried about my safety & walks me home. Another fantastic chapter. Loved drunk Martha! She was actually hilarious. Well done & I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
carywary Posted March 16, 2011 Report Share Posted March 16, 2011 Oh wow Cally, that was fantastic, I actually don't know where to begin! Poor Charlie at the start, I'm glad she was able to let loose when out with the girls. I love how well she was received by the teens, even if it was a bit awkward, and Dex was able to keep his comments to himself for once I thought Ruby handled all of the questions really well. Martha I loved the changelo stuff, especially when the teens were talking about it. Spilling water over Angelo but it did end up in a really nice moment I can't wait to see how this develops!! I LOVED this chapter! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rach Loves H&A Posted March 16, 2011 Report Share Posted March 16, 2011 Great Update!!! Loved Charlie and Martha both having drunk too much. Charlie and Angelo seem destined to be together, always bumping into each other and having big smiles on there face after and he seems to be the perfect gentleman walking her home, especially as she is a bit tipsy. Update Soon!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted March 17, 2011 Report Share Posted March 17, 2011 Great chapter. Liked it Update soon xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JosieTash Posted March 17, 2011 Report Share Posted March 17, 2011 Enjoying this !!!!!! …. especially ………… A yellow stain on her stomach was slowly fading away. Charlie ran her finger across the line-shaped bruise as a tear rolled down her cheek. “Erm….The dog ate it?” Xavier smiled as he scratched his head, looking to Ruby as he did so. “Ruby. If your mum ever has a son. Please. Be nice to him and care for him. Us little brothers do need to have someone to look out for us” Dex said to Ruby. “Baggage? Is that what you call yourself?” Dex asked “Hi, I just thought I’d introduce myself, I am known as ‘baggage’” Dex mocked. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted March 29, 2011 Report Share Posted March 29, 2011 Great chapter. Loved it Jack doubting about what happened to Charlie?? Hope not! Awww Angelo and Charlie going out on a date Update soon please pretty xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rach Loves H&A Posted March 30, 2011 Report Share Posted March 30, 2011 Great Update!!! Loved the chat between Charlie and Angelo, can't wait for their date. Don't like that Martha is still judging Charlie about her age when she had Ruby when she doesn't know the real reason and Jack doubting what happened to Charlie. Update Soon!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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